Fia and Henk.
A free style verse.31 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
Yes, it must be very difficult to deal with Alzheimer's Disease when you're not well yourself. Its is a sad situation, good she has someone she can call for assistance.
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Yes, it must be very difficult to deal with Alzheimer's Disease when you're not well yourself. Its is a sad situation, good she has someone she can call for assistance.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Glasstruth
Life is unpredictable, yet we must do our best. For free verse this has an excellent rhythm and flow. A very nice poem for Fia and Henk. Like how this switches over to Brooke. Maybe if we all stick together that might make the pain a little easier. Well written. Les
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Life is unpredictable, yet we must do our best. For free verse this has an excellent rhythm and flow. A very nice poem for Fia and Henk. Like how this switches over to Brooke. Maybe if we all stick together that might make the pain a little easier. Well written. Les
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Gert sherwood
A Very toucking free verse about your friends' Fia and Henk .
So nice of you to show you care and compost your lovely poem for them.
Gert
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A Very toucking free verse about your friends' Fia and Henk .
So nice of you to show you care and compost your lovely poem for them.
Gert
Comment Written 30-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
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You are welcome
Comment from mumsyone
It's a beautiful photo, Ine, to accompany your heartfelt poem about Fia and Henk. I'm sure she will enjoy both. It's wonderful that she has a friend she can call to talk to.
Lois
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It's a beautiful photo, Ine, to accompany your heartfelt poem about Fia and Henk. I'm sure she will enjoy both. It's wonderful that she has a friend she can call to talk to.
Lois
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful poem for a friend who is dealing with this dreaded disease that her husband has. It is harder for the caretaker than the patient I think , Express that I am sorry for her back pain as I know what that is like,
The white font on the light gray background is a little hard to read. The change is now much easier to read with my bad eyes.
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This is a wonderful poem for a friend who is dealing with this dreaded disease that her husband has. It is harder for the caretaker than the patient I think , Express that I am sorry for her back pain as I know what that is like,
The white font on the light gray background is a little hard to read. The change is now much easier to read with my bad eyes.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend. I will change that.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Thank you for sharing the news of a another FanStorian and this chapter of her life. The picture is great. My only suggestion would be a bit more contrast in font and background. I like the soft tone that it built, yet it is a bit of strain on old eyes like my own.
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Thank you for sharing the news of a another FanStorian and this chapter of her life. The picture is great. My only suggestion would be a bit more contrast in font and background. I like the soft tone that it built, yet it is a bit of strain on old eyes like my own.
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Yes, I agree and will do that.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Ine - this is a very sweet and caring poem. Not easy for a couple when one develops Alzheimers - emotionally and physically it takes its toll. You are a good friend to them and I like the picture you show us very much. Warm regards Dorothy xx
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Hi Ine - this is a very sweet and caring poem. Not easy for a couple when one develops Alzheimers - emotionally and physically it takes its toll. You are a good friend to them and I like the picture you show us very much. Warm regards Dorothy xx
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from tfawcus
There is a telling appropriateness of your choice of white on grey for your presentation. Alzheimer's is like that. This is a heartfelt prose poem which will, I feel sure, be appreciated by Fia.
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There is a telling appropriateness of your choice of white on grey for your presentation. Alzheimer's is like that. This is a heartfelt prose poem which will, I feel sure, be appreciated by Fia.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine, the font is a bit hard to see with my bad eyes, sorry mate. This is a great free verse and I wish I could write them as well as you do. I'm so glad you got to talk to Fia, and I hope both her and Henk are doing as well as can be expected and I hope you are to mu friend. Cheers Fez
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G'day Ine, the font is a bit hard to see with my bad eyes, sorry mate. This is a great free verse and I wish I could write them as well as you do. I'm so glad you got to talk to Fia, and I hope both her and Henk are doing as well as can be expected and I hope you are to mu friend. Cheers Fez
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Nosha17
Kind of you to write a poem for your friend, how difficult it must be for her and not feeling well herself. Please send her my best wishes. Nicely written tribute, do hope things improve soon. Faye
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Kind of you to write a poem for your friend, how difficult it must be for her and not feeling well herself. Please send her my best wishes. Nicely written tribute, do hope things improve soon. Faye
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Comment Written 30-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Will do.
