Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a great piece and a fantastic tribute.
The first two verse in particular I thought were outstanding.
A unique way of writing that begs more than one reading. Engrossing and skilful.
Great stuff
GMG
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Hi there,
This is a great piece and a fantastic tribute.
The first two verse in particular I thought were outstanding.
A unique way of writing that begs more than one reading. Engrossing and skilful.
Great stuff
GMG
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Hello....-smile-...sorry I'm running late....appreciate you enjoying....love Michael
Comment from fluffnstuff
wow do you have the vocabulary!!!I think i said this before . yours are ones i read about three times. really nice write. fluff
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reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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wow do you have the vocabulary!!!I think i said this before . yours are ones i read about three times. really nice write. fluff
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Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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haha...-smile-...well...-lookingatfingernails-...I suppose I could pretend....but I wont....lol.....ahhh thank you pretty Lady....love Michael
Comment from tfawcus
This has depth and shades of meaning that I feel sure Brooke will appreciate. Although her personal preference may be for structure and form, the is a wealth of meaning in the spaces between your words. There is much more to the dandelion than its brash yellowness; more to people too than the outer facade.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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This has depth and shades of meaning that I feel sure Brooke will appreciate. Although her personal preference may be for structure and form, the is a wealth of meaning in the spaces between your words. There is much more to the dandelion than its brash yellowness; more to people too than the outer facade.
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Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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why thank you Sir...appreciate that...yes, she learned and taught structured verse very well....but I think Brooke likes anything that sings. Well Amen the shell gives way to spirit form or another for some.... love Michael
Comment from l.raven
Michael, I have always said you have your own unique way of wording your poetry....this is truly one of your best baby....
Dandelion green
yellow unseen
so damn beautiful ever again
Brooke is truly going to love your poem...wording wonderful...she and Grace both love Dandelions...I always tease her... tell Brooke they are weeds...you make them sound like Roses...picture beautiful...perfect...
and I love the music...I hope she comes back soon...I miss her...beautifully written...love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Michael, I have always said you have your own unique way of wording your poetry....this is truly one of your best baby....
Dandelion green
yellow unseen
so damn beautiful ever again
Brooke is truly going to love your poem...wording wonderful...she and Grace both love Dandelions...I always tease her... tell Brooke they are weeds...you make them sound like Roses...picture beautiful...perfect...
and I love the music...I hope she comes back soon...I miss her...beautifully written...love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Hello Sweetheart....-smile-....thank you so much but I know she'll appreciate yours just as well...give Grace a hug when you get home....love Michael
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HI Baby, I know Brooke will love them all...Grace may have to wait...but I will see to it she gets one...thank you my love...you know I love you dearly...always and forever...Love Linda xxoo
