Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Ronni
Thank you for posting this lovely poem about Brooke. I am sure this is
one she will love and be encouraged by; as you also share all our sentiments
and feelings about her too. Love that gorgeous picture. We are indeed
all praying for Brooke, God Bless her in her recovery,
Blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thank you for posting this lovely poem about Brooke. I am sure this is
one she will love and be encouraged by; as you also share all our sentiments
and feelings about her too. Love that gorgeous picture. We are indeed
all praying for Brooke, God Bless her in her recovery,
Blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely weekend ahead.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Very nice way Robina,
for members of Fanstory to write their thoughts about Brooke as a reviewer, a poet and a instructor.
I'm sure Brooke will appreciate your rhyming message
Gert
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Very nice way Robina,
for members of Fanstory to write their thoughts about Brooke as a reviewer, a poet and a instructor.
I'm sure Brooke will appreciate your rhyming message
Gert
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
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You are welcome Robina
Comment from JourneyHolm
I gather that this is a sort of prayer for some sick or lonely soul. The imagery of fairies takes this into an ethereal realm, but (in a way) takes some power away from the greater theme. I am torn between earth and beyond and can't quite make out the final intent for this poem. Regardless, it was beautiful and touching. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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I gather that this is a sort of prayer for some sick or lonely soul. The imagery of fairies takes this into an ethereal realm, but (in a way) takes some power away from the greater theme. I am torn between earth and beyond and can't quite make out the final intent for this poem. Regardless, it was beautiful and touching. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Ine - a very sweet dedication to Brooke. So many on FS have done so and I am sure she will appreciate them all when she reads them and realises how much she is in our thoughts. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hi Ine - a very sweet dedication to Brooke. So many on FS have done so and I am sure she will appreciate them all when she reads them and realises how much she is in our thoughts. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from amada
A beautiful poem for Brooke and the great picture is very symbolic of a beautiful lady like Brooke. Amazing work and outpouring of love for one first poet in the site.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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A beautiful poem for Brooke and the great picture is very symbolic of a beautiful lady like Brooke. Amazing work and outpouring of love for one first poet in the site.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from catch22
Hi Ine, this is a very heartfelt sentiment in your poem. I do like the bit of sporadic rhyming throughout. I was not a fan of the dark days/ locked cupboard image though because it felt too out of place with the rest of the poem--too dramatic. Other than that, it's a very sweet poem you've penned for Brooke that will bring cheer to her and her family.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hi Ine, this is a very heartfelt sentiment in your poem. I do like the bit of sporadic rhyming throughout. I was not a fan of the dark days/ locked cupboard image though because it felt too out of place with the rest of the poem--too dramatic. Other than that, it's a very sweet poem you've penned for Brooke that will bring cheer to her and her family.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I think your words speak for all of us here at FanStory, Ine. Brooke has been such a positive influence for me personally, and undoubtedly countless others here who have benefited from her steadfast dedication to the craft of poetry. Her tutelage is priceless, as is her friendship. I know she has been in all of our thoughts and prayers.
Well done. I'm sure Brooke will love this one!
~Dean
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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I think your words speak for all of us here at FanStory, Ine. Brooke has been such a positive influence for me personally, and undoubtedly countless others here who have benefited from her steadfast dedication to the craft of poetry. Her tutelage is priceless, as is her friendship. I know she has been in all of our thoughts and prayers.
Well done. I'm sure Brooke will love this one!
~Dean
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
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You too.
Comment from petalangela
I glean that this is a poem for Brooke I never had the honour so far of her reviewing my work.
The words are lovely the meter is good and the message is loving and supportive. Artwork very pretty very apt, but I have had a hard time reading the text with bright on bright it's not easy to to make out
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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I glean that this is a poem for Brooke I never had the honour so far of her reviewing my work.
The words are lovely the meter is good and the message is loving and supportive. Artwork very pretty very apt, but I have had a hard time reading the text with bright on bright it's not easy to to make out
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. If she gets better, all you have to do, is fan her and ask her to fan you too.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Ine,
This is another nice poem you've written in A chapter in the book Get Well, Brooke! It was a very interesting read and I'm sure she will like it too. I hope whatever sickness she has will go away soon.
Kat
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reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hi Ine,
This is another nice poem you've written in A chapter in the book Get Well, Brooke! It was a very interesting read and I'm sure she will like it too. I hope whatever sickness she has will go away soon.
Kat
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Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
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You have a great rest of the week too.
