BLAZE: Angel from Hell
Viewing comments for Chapter 108 "A Pep Talk"Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.
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Comment from Gloria ....
Aw, Franny gives such a great pep talk and oh so true too.
I love Sebastian coming out in the skirt -- the tee shirt hanging off centre from one shoulder shows he has a little sexy chica in him after all.
Uh huh! So Blaze is going to be able to pull off the transformation even without the camera. Love the backstory about the cameras too.
As always written to perfection, Phyllis.
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Aw, Franny gives such a great pep talk and oh so true too.
I love Sebastian coming out in the skirt -- the tee shirt hanging off centre from one shoulder shows he has a little sexy chica in him after all.
Uh huh! So Blaze is going to be able to pull off the transformation even without the camera. Love the backstory about the cameras too.
As always written to perfection, Phyllis.
Gloria
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you so much, Gloria. Glorious review, as always. :)
Comment from Selina Stambi
as if .... oh, yikes, lady! You leave your reader on tenterhooks. :)
Hope you feel better soon. Sounds nasty.
Love,
Sonali
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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as if .... oh, yikes, lady! You leave your reader on tenterhooks. :)
Hope you feel better soon. Sounds nasty.
Love,
Sonali
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you very much, Sonali. Feeling a bit better today. :)
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So glad.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have the cough too, but mine is allergies; horrible, horrible allergies. I enjoyed reading your post. I'll pray your cough goes away. Good writing.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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I have the cough too, but mine is allergies; horrible, horrible allergies. I enjoyed reading your post. I'll pray your cough goes away. Good writing.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks, Barbara. My hubby suffers from allergies, to lots of things, including outdoor vegetation, horses, and cats. I feel for you, since there's really no escape. You can't just 'get well' from allergies.
Comment from Spitfire
Hope you're feeling better. I spent most of the day in bed with an upset stomach and wretched headache. You need to give this to your preacher. It's fine comfort material.
You, too, have residual power. Because you were not supposed to be included in the banishment from Heaven, you have a lot more to begin with. More importantly, you are not separated from its source. God is with you and you are with Him. When you apply your faith, His power will channel through you, but only in the most positive way."
Enlightening paragraph.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hope you're feeling better. I spent most of the day in bed with an upset stomach and wretched headache. You need to give this to your preacher. It's fine comfort material.
You, too, have residual power. Because you were not supposed to be included in the banishment from Heaven, you have a lot more to begin with. More importantly, you are not separated from its source. God is with you and you are with Him. When you apply your faith, His power will channel through you, but only in the most positive way."
Enlightening paragraph.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks a million for the sixer, Shari. So sorry to hear you've been sick. Headaches are the worst. But hopefully you'll be fine tomorrow. My cough finally eased up and I can walk again without noodly legs. :)
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hey Phyllis, So there's about 12 cameras still around earth? That's a good Segway into your collection of short stories you're considering writing.
as if her body was extremely hot and a white light started emanating from her third eye. No? Okay, I'll see what you come up with, lol. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hey Phyllis, So there's about 12 cameras still around earth? That's a good Segway into your collection of short stories you're considering writing.
as if her body was extremely hot and a white light started emanating from her third eye. No? Okay, I'll see what you come up with, lol. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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LOL! Third eye... good plan. :)
The cameras are all with agents, except for the one in the dumpster. I do plan to write a second Snapshots book based on it, but don't know when.
Thanks so much for a fun review, Lou. :)
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I was being absolutely serious, LOL. I forget not everyone is into metaphysical philosophy. Supposedly, our third eye is located on forehead and connects us to the spiritual (among other places).
Comment from boxergirl
So glad to see Franny show up to give Blaze some encouragement. I liked the way she explained God's infinite power and that we can't do it in our own.
Hope you and Mark feel better soon.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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So glad to see Franny show up to give Blaze some encouragement. I liked the way she explained God's infinite power and that we can't do it in our own.
Hope you and Mark feel better soon.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thank you very much. :)
Comment from judiverse
Franny always seems to know when Blaze needs her. Without the camera's power, Blaze isn't sure how she can restore Sebastian to his former self. Interesting discussion they have about Luke and his limitations. Blaze has seen them. Maybe the angels Luke had working for him wanted to believe so much that the camera would work, that they had faith in Lucifer. But his powers have eroded. With Franny's words, Blaze feels more confident. Amazing how quickly Franny can disappear. Franny's now ready to draw on her own resources to try to restore Sebastian. Very interesting judi
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Franny always seems to know when Blaze needs her. Without the camera's power, Blaze isn't sure how she can restore Sebastian to his former self. Interesting discussion they have about Luke and his limitations. Blaze has seen them. Maybe the angels Luke had working for him wanted to believe so much that the camera would work, that they had faith in Lucifer. But his powers have eroded. With Franny's words, Blaze feels more confident. Amazing how quickly Franny can disappear. Franny's now ready to draw on her own resources to try to restore Sebastian. Very interesting judi
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thank you so much, Judi. :)
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You're welcome. Blaze will surely come through for Sebastian. judi
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, this most definitely deserves a six -
such an impressive part, Phyllis -
I wish I had a Franny to talk things over with - she's so lovely.
Now you've left us up in the air - and you talk about me!!!.
Margaret
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Oh, this most definitely deserves a six -
such an impressive part, Phyllis -
I wish I had a Franny to talk things over with - she's so lovely.
Now you've left us up in the air - and you talk about me!!!.
Margaret
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks, Margaret. Yes, we both leave the reader wanting more. Oldest trick in the book. LOL! :)
Comment from rmj09
The focus Blaze finding faith. The storyline development Blaze discovers Franny not only speaking to her but present. She reminds Blaze of faith in God and herself and the gifts God provides each and to use these gifts. Franny leaves and Blaze has Sebastian sit where Franny had sat. They both sit and pray when she feels a sensation of relief.
The dialog continues the development of the characters personalities. The narration shows the action caused by the appearance of Franny.
The emotion I felt was joy that Blaze knows we each have gifts to help others as long as we have faith in God and ourselves.
Keep on writing.
Phyllis, take care of yourself and Mark drink plenty of cranberry juices and H2O. I'm still recovering from my surgery. The interesting part is my blood sugar and blood pressure are finally normal. They say it is from the stress my body was going through due to the hemmoroids. God will help you in your time of need. Walk in the shadow of God. *J* Rita
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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The focus Blaze finding faith. The storyline development Blaze discovers Franny not only speaking to her but present. She reminds Blaze of faith in God and herself and the gifts God provides each and to use these gifts. Franny leaves and Blaze has Sebastian sit where Franny had sat. They both sit and pray when she feels a sensation of relief.
The dialog continues the development of the characters personalities. The narration shows the action caused by the appearance of Franny.
The emotion I felt was joy that Blaze knows we each have gifts to help others as long as we have faith in God and ourselves.
Keep on writing.
Phyllis, take care of yourself and Mark drink plenty of cranberry juices and H2O. I'm still recovering from my surgery. The interesting part is my blood sugar and blood pressure are finally normal. They say it is from the stress my body was going through due to the hemmoroids. God will help you in your time of need. Walk in the shadow of God. *J* Rita
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks, Rita. So glad to hear your surgery took care of several problems. Now, be sure to enjoy each and every day, for we never know what fate has in store for us.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Trust you to finish there!!!! I think you have it in for me, Phyllis, I didn't give you that nasty cough! LOL. This time, I not only loved the page, but your author's notes were very good. The explanation of how the, 'Angel power' works was very clever! Now I want to find out what Blaze was feeling like. Wonderful! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Trust you to finish there!!!! I think you have it in for me, Phyllis, I didn't give you that nasty cough! LOL. This time, I not only loved the page, but your author's notes were very good. The explanation of how the, 'Angel power' works was very clever! Now I want to find out what Blaze was feeling like. Wonderful! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thank you so much, Sandra. Will work on it this evening while you sleep. Today I took my scooter all around my yard and spray-killed weeds. Sure was easier than walking and carrying that heavy tank! :)
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Oh, brilliant! It was the best thing you could have bought yourself. Now you have no excuse, you can get out there and paint the town red!! I am looking forward to the next chapter, someone finished it on a cliffhanger! Can you believe that???? xxx
