Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from mommerry
Lady bugs are good friends for those of who grow potatoes. Unfortunately, the Asian beetle is a twin to a lady bug and it is a nasty visitor to our soybean fields and when the beans are harvested they become nasty visitors inside our homes. Enjoyed your well-rhymed ditty. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Lady bugs are good friends for those of who grow potatoes. Unfortunately, the Asian beetle is a twin to a lady bug and it is a nasty visitor to our soybean fields and when the beans are harvested they become nasty visitors inside our homes. Enjoyed your well-rhymed ditty. Good job.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you very much! I hope you have lots of ladies for your taters and zero nasties to spoil the soy's soil.
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Enjoyed your witty response.
Comment from His Grayness
This is a lovely honorarium to Brooke for her many gifts to all the writers at Fanstory. It is beautifully packaged in art and word and I only wish I had six stars to applaud this fine work. HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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This is a lovely honorarium to Brooke for her many gifts to all the writers at Fanstory. It is beautifully packaged in art and word and I only wish I had six stars to applaud this fine work. HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you very much! I send all my stars her way in the hopes that they will shed healing light upon her. Your kind words are all the applaud I need as to share a smile or one warm wish is a little piece of heaven here on earth.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is amazing. I enjoyed reading it so much. It is very touching. The ladybug is a favorite of Brooke's. I know this will bring her smiles. Your format, rhyme, choice words, and artwork combine to make a special presentation. Good job. Thanks for giving me a chance to read it.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Your poem is amazing. I enjoyed reading it so much. It is very touching. The ladybug is a favorite of Brooke's. I know this will bring her smiles. Your format, rhyme, choice words, and artwork combine to make a special presentation. Good job. Thanks for giving me a chance to read it.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you for your kind feedback and, more importantly, your prayers and good wishes for Brooke.
Comment from Sasha
I miss her so much. Since being on FS since other than when she was visiting her grandson, not a day passed without one of her stunning poems. I miss her very much and pray that she comes back to us soon.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I miss her so much. Since being on FS since other than when she was visiting her grandson, not a day passed without one of her stunning poems. I miss her very much and pray that she comes back to us soon.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Me too and with all these good wishes sent her way she cannot help but benefit from the excellent karma surrounding her.
Comment from justafan
What a loving poem you have created my sweet friend. A pet name perhaps for a love one? I love it. Well done! The artwork is splendid as well.
Always justafan,
Missy
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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What a loving poem you have created my sweet friend. A pet name perhaps for a love one? I love it. Well done! The artwork is splendid as well.
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you so much, Missy! Brooke (Adewpearl) has a thing for lady bugs and dandelions and it is hard to deal with the word dandelion in sonnet form LOL (she would probably thump me for not being brave enough to give it a whirl). I am so happy you enjoyed this as my intent is to send good wishes her way in her hour of need. I am very grateful for your kind and encouraging support for this piece.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Monica, lovely sentiments in your well-written poem. You are right that there are so many rooting for Brooke, and the power of a multitude of well-wishers hopefully have power.
I think if you had a smaller font and the lines fit across the page the presentation would look better. I am noticing this in many entries on the new site.
Mary
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reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hi Monica, lovely sentiments in your well-written poem. You are right that there are so many rooting for Brooke, and the power of a multitude of well-wishers hopefully have power.
I think if you had a smaller font and the lines fit across the page the presentation would look better. I am noticing this in many entries on the new site.
Mary
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Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thanks, Mary! I agree, if wishes count for anything then she will be back with us soon. Strange as all the lines are correct in my view, but I use classic so I will take a look at it the other way and see if that is the problem.
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I use classic, but classic does not allow us to submit it. I do feel there is a difference since we got the new site, it does interfere with the lines. I am having problems with it myself. Mary
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It was splitting lines in the new version and not in Classic for me. So not I have it so it does not split lines in either .... what a pain LOL.
Comment from TAB_that's me
with all the well wishes and prayers for Brooke, she and God should certainly hear our plead for her to get well. Great poem and tribute to Brooke.
Teresa
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reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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with all the well wishes and prayers for Brooke, she and God should certainly hear our plead for her to get well. Great poem and tribute to Brooke.
Teresa
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Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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From your fingertips to God's great keyboard in the sky ..... thanks for the feedback but I can hear her telling me the proximate at the end needs to be amended LOL.
