Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi yeltel

I'm sure Brooke will indeed enjoy your fun rhyming poem about her love for the yellow wed she calls- a gold carpet
alluring her lawn

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you for the great review, Gert. It is wonderful to see you! We all are praying for her, and I believe in the power of a collective prayer.

Comment from judester

Excellent

I am sure Brooke will love these beautiful poems from her fanstory friends.
I am moved to see each writer, with their unique style, yet one purpose.... to show their love for Brooke, truly heartwarming. cheers judester

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you for the great review. We all are praying for her, and I believe in the power of a collective prayer.

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I only heard the news today and I have had her on my mind ever since. What a wonderful writer and person. She always seemed to me to be the strength of this site, the moral poetic guide so as to speak. You have chosen well in this ode, to use dandelions as the central motif in writing about her. How many times did those yellow wonders appear in her children's poetry? Your verses are immaculate as I've come to expect from you, but it is the sentiments and essence of your poem that is of most import. Let's hope she can overcome.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you, Mark, for the great review. She truly loved her dandelions! see how many poems in this book are written using this flower. We all are praying for her, and I believe in the power of a collective prayer?

Comment from emkoutny

Excellent

This poem brings together the idea of friendship, childhood, nature, imagination and flowers vs. weeds. I hope your friend gets well soon. This is a lovely tribute to her.

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 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you for the great review. We all are praying for her, and I believe in the power of a collective prayer.

reply by emkoutny on 28-May-2015

God bless you and your friend. I've always been a big fan of St. Jude.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a nice feel better poem. I know Brooke will enjoy the artwork and yellow background. Excellent job of rhyme. The story flows well. The references to things she liked is great.

I would change:

ther leis to either their leis OR the leis

Good job and thanks for allowing me to read this poem.

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 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you for the great review. We all are praying for her, and I believe in the power of a collective prayer.