Life
Naani-an acrostic/rhymer15 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Good plot. Easy to follow story line. Plenty of smooth flowing action. Descriptive language well used throughout this story.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Good plot. Easy to follow story line. Plenty of smooth flowing action. Descriptive language well used throughout this story.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Hello Brett, appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :) This is a really clever and unique take on the prompt.
I admire how you incorporated both rhyme and acrostic into your naani which is in excellent syllable count.
Well done and good luck in the voting booth.
Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Hi :) This is a really clever and unique take on the prompt.
I admire how you incorporated both rhyme and acrostic into your naani which is in excellent syllable count.
Well done and good luck in the voting booth.
Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Hello Debra, my friend, I am pleased you like the write; appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from bayforesthimankush
It is said that history repeats itself. Men are blind to see this. That is life. Life comes and goes. This is the history of life and mankind.
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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It is said that history repeats itself. Men are blind to see this. That is life. Life comes and goes. This is the history of life and mankind.
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the kind review, thank you very much.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine Naani and acrostic
The syllable count is good for the naani
Very good concluding line
There some symbols in the last line (green circles), don't know if you intended that.
You might want the check it
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reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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This is a fine Naani and acrostic
The syllable count is good for the naani
Very good concluding line
There some symbols in the last line (green circles), don't know if you intended that.
You might want the check it
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Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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rspoet, I thank you for your visit and the constructive review, appreciate it very much. I tried to correct that glitch, it seems to come back, will try again, very kind of you to notice, thank you very much.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi...
-Indeed, you'd think we's learn after centuries of 'lessons.'
-A Naani and and Acrostic---very creative.
-Good entry for the contest. Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
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reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Hi...
-Indeed, you'd think we's learn after centuries of 'lessons.'
-A Naani and and Acrostic---very creative.
-Good entry for the contest. Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
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Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Hello Jax, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
