Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Lots of action in this part - so glad Soni is safe..
fascinating reading about the black bear - I've
never seen one close up in the wilds - only from
a great distance when on a train on a journey
through the Rockies.
The dogs are amazing too.
Margaret
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Lots of action in this part - so glad Soni is safe..
fascinating reading about the black bear - I've
never seen one close up in the wilds - only from
a great distance when on a train on a journey
through the Rockies.
The dogs are amazing too.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from barkingdog
It's been six months since I've read you. It looks like you've been busy with a very creative adventure/spirit guide story. From your notes, I can see that the reviewers are trying to trip you up and making you clarify places and animals. They did this to me and I often wondered why didn't they look it up themselves and save me the trouble. LOL
I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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It's been six months since I've read you. It looks like you've been busy with a very creative adventure/spirit guide story. From your notes, I can see that the reviewers are trying to trip you up and making you clarify places and animals. They did this to me and I often wondered why didn't they look it up themselves and save me the trouble. LOL
I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I have wondered the same thing. I got a review today that told me I should summarize my story for new people. I felt like saying I refuse to do it because I am trying to keep people who only read me for the money away. I figured I get into trouble for that. LOL Anyway, don't stay away for so long next time. I really miss your novels. They were some of the best on the site.
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I miss being here, but it's too much of a strain on my health to keep up with constant posting.
I do appreciate your compliment to my earlier work. That means a lot to me.
I always hated those 'read for the money' folks. They always had pat reviews that would fit anything that they read. I reported quite a few. LOL
Us both being teachers, I guess we hate cheaters.:)
Did you read 'Madeline'? That's all that I've written this year. It is a short story. Contest entry. I won. Ha!
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I am not sure I did. I will look it up.
Comment from Chris Tee
Barbara your sand stone is spot-on. I studied Geology 3 at University and El Capitan is a Permian-aged limestone layer sediment or reef. This part is another excellent write and I am thrilled to read your work. Well done indeed with this excellent chapter part.
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Barbara your sand stone is spot-on. I studied Geology 3 at University and El Capitan is a Permian-aged limestone layer sediment or reef. This part is another excellent write and I am thrilled to read your work. Well done indeed with this excellent chapter part.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Good plot. Easy to follow story line. Plenty of smooth flowing action. Descriptive language well used throughout this story.
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Good plot. Easy to follow story line. Plenty of smooth flowing action. Descriptive language well used throughout this story.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Ohhh... the bear was spirit that had come to protect Soni! I lovvve it. Those dogs really have an amazing vocabulary if they know what poles are. Enjoyable chapter. :)
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Ohhh... the bear was spirit that had come to protect Soni! I lovvve it. Those dogs really have an amazing vocabulary if they know what poles are. Enjoyable chapter. :)
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from Scripter Ink
A very interesting story, without any context of the previous chapters and just from what I've read, this gives the feel of a Native American spirit dream. Though, there are a lot of spirits in this particular dream. Either way, you've made me curious so I'm going to read from the beginning.
Character dialogue and discussion is also fleshed out, I like how you made it clear where he was thinking to himself and speaking out loud. Thank you for the wonderful read, ^_^!
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A very interesting story, without any context of the previous chapters and just from what I've read, this gives the feel of a Native American spirit dream. Though, there are a lot of spirits in this particular dream. Either way, you've made me curious so I'm going to read from the beginning.
Character dialogue and discussion is also fleshed out, I like how you made it clear where he was thinking to himself and speaking out loud. Thank you for the wonderful read, ^_^!
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from marylou4
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. It has captivated my attention from the moment I started reading it.Your is exciting, your action flows naturally, without being forced.
You characters are interesting, because they are not superficial, they have depth and dimension. They think, act and talk in an expected manner. The action flows smoothly; not forced or restrained.
I found no technical errors in your work. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story. It has captivated my attention from the moment I started reading it.Your is exciting, your action flows naturally, without being forced.
You characters are interesting, because they are not superficial, they have depth and dimension. They think, act and talk in an expected manner. The action flows smoothly; not forced or restrained.
I found no technical errors in your work. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from boxergirl
Great stuff, Barbara. Love the interaction between Jim and the dogs. And the bear was too funny. Now it seems to have disappeared, maybe the spirit of her grandfather?
Countdown continues....8-)
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Great stuff, Barbara. Love the interaction between Jim and the dogs. And the bear was too funny. Now it seems to have disappeared, maybe the spirit of her grandfather?
Countdown continues....8-)
Comment Written 25-May-2015
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Comment from Jay Squires
I really enjoyed this chapter, Barbara. It seemed to have more humor than most. Especially, Jim got in the act with his "dog's union" and thought it was so funny he said it again to the horse.
Jim skinned and then placed them on a stick before he set it over the campfire. [I'm not an outdoorsman, but wouldn't he also gut them?]
Couldn't find any spags. A good job.
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I really enjoyed this chapter, Barbara. It seemed to have more humor than most. Especially, Jim got in the act with his "dog's union" and thought it was so funny he said it again to the horse.
Jim skinned and then placed them on a stick before he set it over the campfire. [I'm not an outdoorsman, but wouldn't he also gut them?]
Couldn't find any spags. A good job.
Comment Written 25-May-2015
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Comment from bookishfabler
Hey girl, how r you doing? Hope you r feeling better. Sorry its been so long. Missed your whole book. Hope I catch the next one from the beginning. I've actually been here for three whole days. Even am finishing up a story for a contest. Feels so good to write. Didn't realize how much I missed it. Hope to keep coming back. Nice seeing you
Hugs heidi
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Hey girl, how r you doing? Hope you r feeling better. Sorry its been so long. Missed your whole book. Hope I catch the next one from the beginning. I've actually been here for three whole days. Even am finishing up a story for a contest. Feels so good to write. Didn't realize how much I missed it. Hope to keep coming back. Nice seeing you
Hugs heidi
Comment Written 25-May-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Don't stay away for so long next time. I really miss your novels. They were some of the best on the site.
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Wow that is sweet of you to say. I've been on more frequently. Getting ready for a contest soon. So how r u?
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Wow that is sweet of you to say. I've been on more frequently. Getting ready for a contest soon. So how r u?
