Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it's always nice to get my Jim and Soni fix for the week, and it's also great to learn things about Texas that I didn't necessarily know, and honestly had never thought about. Of course, I would have suspected all those animals to be in Texas, along with a long list of others, but knowledge of the limestone will come in handy one of these days. Thanks for another great chapter. :-)
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Well, it's always nice to get my Jim and Soni fix for the week, and it's also great to learn things about Texas that I didn't necessarily know, and honestly had never thought about. Of course, I would have suspected all those animals to be in Texas, along with a long list of others, but knowledge of the limestone will come in handy one of these days. Thanks for another great chapter. :-)
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from Writingfundimension
'The black bear stood on its hind legs, showing his full, seven feet tall, size and roared. He moved closer, only 15 feet away.'
Holy crap, I'd be runnin' for the hills. Jim is a brave man.
'The other end of the rope, he tied around each victim's neck.'
Wow, neat trick, further showing Jim's an experienced professional.
I love that the bear may be a powerful apparition!
Great job, Barbara.
:) Bev
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'The black bear stood on its hind legs, showing his full, seven feet tall, size and roared. He moved closer, only 15 feet away.'
Holy crap, I'd be runnin' for the hills. Jim is a brave man.
'The other end of the rope, he tied around each victim's neck.'
Wow, neat trick, further showing Jim's an experienced professional.
I love that the bear may be a powerful apparition!
Great job, Barbara.
:) Bev
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Hmm, the Great Bear Spirit intervening? Why do I have a feeling these bushwackers are working for the Hispanic neighbour who wanted to ride Midnight? Somehow I get the feeling he's part of the drug cartel and wants her ranch as well ...
That also leads me to thinking the Homeland Security clown is also working for them. Not a good combination, I just hope Jim can call in the cavalry he's going to need pretty damn quick in the not too distant future methinks.
Patrick
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Hi Barbara,
Hmm, the Great Bear Spirit intervening? Why do I have a feeling these bushwackers are working for the Hispanic neighbour who wanted to ride Midnight? Somehow I get the feeling he's part of the drug cartel and wants her ranch as well ...
That also leads me to thinking the Homeland Security clown is also working for them. Not a good combination, I just hope Jim can call in the cavalry he's going to need pretty damn quick in the not too distant future methinks.
Patrick
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Comment from Donovan
How can anyone question the technical part of your story? Nincompoopish blatherskites are what they are. They don't question two dogs that understand better than most workers and certainly better then teenage kids when given chores. Look, down to the nitty gritty....we have gone through a lot of pages and if this guy Jim is going to have his way with Soni, he better get on the stick. And...wild rabbits..hmm...what's a little tularemia?
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How can anyone question the technical part of your story? Nincompoopish blatherskites are what they are. They don't question two dogs that understand better than most workers and certainly better then teenage kids when given chores. Look, down to the nitty gritty....we have gone through a lot of pages and if this guy Jim is going to have his way with Soni, he better get on the stick. And...wild rabbits..hmm...what's a little tularemia?
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I always love hearing from you. Before long Tatiana will be cooking again, you sound hungry.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love those smart dogs that knows the English language. My dogs know a few words but nothing like these. Your story is excellent and I can't wait to read more. Shirley
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I love those smart dogs that knows the English language. My dogs know a few words but nothing like these. Your story is excellent and I can't wait to read more. Shirley
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. My dachshund understands way to much English for his own good.
Comment from kriver
Hi,
I really enjoyed reading this chapter
because of the animals of course.
The bad guys after getting attacked
by those 2 dogs probably wouldn't even need to be tied up there wouldn't be
much left to worry about. Those dogs are huge. Anyways, it is a good write the character development and interactions are very good.
The dialogue is smooth and flows well.
The scenes described well.The story line is moving along smoothly and has enough action to really hold the interest of the reader.
Over all it is a very good piece.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Hi,
I really enjoyed reading this chapter
because of the animals of course.
The bad guys after getting attacked
by those 2 dogs probably wouldn't even need to be tied up there wouldn't be
much left to worry about. Those dogs are huge. Anyways, it is a good write the character development and interactions are very good.
The dialogue is smooth and flows well.
The scenes described well.The story line is moving along smoothly and has enough action to really hold the interest of the reader.
Over all it is a very good piece.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from Sasha
I get it, the bear is a spirit that had come to protect Soni! Great description of the landscape in this one. The dogs are amazing and I do hope help arrives soon. Great work with this one and I didn't see anything that needed fixing or changing.
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I get it, the bear is a spirit that had come to protect Soni! Great description of the landscape in this one. The dogs are amazing and I do hope help arrives soon. Great work with this one and I didn't see anything that needed fixing or changing.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from thee-name
Excellent chapter. Writing was interesting
The black bear stood on its hind legs,showing his full seven feet tall size and roared. He moved closer, only 15 feet away.
Suggestion: take away comma between tall & size.
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Excellent chapter. Writing was interesting
The black bear stood on its hind legs,showing his full seven feet tall size and roared. He moved closer, only 15 feet away.
Suggestion: take away comma between tall & size.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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thank you!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your right I do find this piece confusing. When I have time one day I will read the rest of your story as what I read here sounds fascinating. the story flows nicely and holds the attention of the reader right from the start. Love your descriptions of the landscape and the animals involved. Good work.
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Your right I do find this piece confusing. When I have time one day I will read the rest of your story as what I read here sounds fascinating. the story flows nicely and holds the attention of the reader right from the start. Love your descriptions of the landscape and the animals involved. Good work.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent chapter, Barbara, kuruk sent his spirit animal to guard soni in her time of need. jim is communicating very well with the dogs. I enjoyed reading it.
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this is an excellent chapter, Barbara, kuruk sent his spirit animal to guard soni in her time of need. jim is communicating very well with the dogs. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Very close, good guess.
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are you in the flood zone where you live? I've been meaning to ask you
