Brocolli, Milk, What?
A simple conversation28 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi John,
firstly let me say, I really love these stories of the things that light up your life... yeah your wonderful family and especially your grandchildren... would have thought you may have been upstairs to read Burt and Mango though, but I guess they may have heard that a couple of times by now, hey?... smile)))))))))).
You really did a wonderful job with such a cute result... inspiration comes from the most precious gifts.
(There) was always "Grammy, come...
or a huge request after do (it) once again was...
As I watched them that night 'chilling out' together, ...
Hey, why are you sticking your tongues out at me--what did I do?
"Awe, thanks Ryder--Aiden, how about you?"
Anything to do with children and you shine Brother!
With our thoughts we create,
the magic of our visions,
James.
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Hi John,
firstly let me say, I really love these stories of the things that light up your life... yeah your wonderful family and especially your grandchildren... would have thought you may have been upstairs to read Burt and Mango though, but I guess they may have heard that a couple of times by now, hey?... smile)))))))))).
You really did a wonderful job with such a cute result... inspiration comes from the most precious gifts.
(There) was always "Grammy, come...
or a huge request after do (it) once again was...
As I watched them that night 'chilling out' together, ...
Hey, why are you sticking your tongues out at me--what did I do?
"Awe, thanks Ryder--Aiden, how about you?"
Anything to do with children and you shine Brother!
With our thoughts we create,
the magic of our visions,
James.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
Comment from flip86
Putting words into their mouths is a fun way to write, right? and that picture says it all. As always, pictures add color to a story. It helps you think and create a masterpiece as you did here. Their was always a, "Gramma- I'm not sure if "their" should be-Theirs or There. You are an awesome grandma. Thanks for sharing. I enjoy reading it.
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Putting words into their mouths is a fun way to write, right? and that picture says it all. As always, pictures add color to a story. It helps you think and create a masterpiece as you did here. Their was always a, "Gramma- I'm not sure if "their" should be-Theirs or There. You are an awesome grandma. Thanks for sharing. I enjoy reading it.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, John, that was precious! I know what you mean though, I love all my grandchildren to bits, but my goodness, there is another saying, they are lovely to have for a while, but it is lovely to hand them back! Yes, we are a little too old to take them on full time! I don't know how we survived into old age, do you? Bless them, they look gorgeous, John, and I can tell you love them to bits too! Lovely story, my friend. xsx Sandra
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Aww, John, that was precious! I know what you mean though, I love all my grandchildren to bits, but my goodness, there is another saying, they are lovely to have for a while, but it is lovely to hand them back! Yes, we are a little too old to take them on full time! I don't know how we survived into old age, do you? Bless them, they look gorgeous, John, and I can tell you love them to bits too! Lovely story, my friend. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 28-May-2015
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! G'day John, they are getting cuter by the day mate. This is another enjoyable read and glimpse into your life and I always enjoy it Sir. Very well done once again. Cheers Fez
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Hahahaha! G'day John, they are getting cuter by the day mate. This is another enjoyable read and glimpse into your life and I always enjoy it Sir. Very well done once again. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 28-May-2015
Comment from country ranch writer
it is said if you just sit back and listen you will be shocked at what kids have to say and it is true what they say out of the mouth of babes
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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it is said if you just sit back and listen you will be shocked at what kids have to say and it is true what they say out of the mouth of babes
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you for the review.
John
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welcome
Comment from IndianaIrish
An adorable short story, John. It's always so much fun to give kids adult dialogue. They must have exhausted every second of your day if it's taken seven weeks to recover! lol
I enjoyed your story and the photo is,so cute.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Their(There) was always a, "Grammy, come," or "Grammy, play with me," (or)
(")Grammy, can you color with us?"
huge request after doing its(it) once was, "Poppa, pick me up
"Okay, everyone upstairs and under the covers, Poppa's going to read, Scuffy the Tugboat." (Who said this?)
"Yea!"(who said this?)
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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An adorable short story, John. It's always so much fun to give kids adult dialogue. They must have exhausted every second of your day if it's taken seven weeks to recover! lol
I enjoyed your story and the photo is,so cute.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Their(There) was always a, "Grammy, come," or "Grammy, play with me," (or)
(")Grammy, can you color with us?"
huge request after doing its(it) once was, "Poppa, pick me up
"Okay, everyone upstairs and under the covers, Poppa's going to read, Scuffy the Tugboat." (Who said this?)
"Yea!"(who said this?)
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Actually seven weeks was an exaggeration. Mostly for exhaustive effect.
Thanks for reading. Hopefully we'll see them next month. John
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Yes, I got that. That's why I commented.
Comment from petalangela
Grand children are delightful but exhaustion they our reward for tolerating our own children. Grandchildren are gods revenge on our behalf against our own brood for the chaos they created.
It's rue that horrid veg always floats to the top Yuch
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Grand children are delightful but exhaustion they our reward for tolerating our own children. Grandchildren are gods revenge on our behalf against our own brood for the chaos they created.
It's rue that horrid veg always floats to the top Yuch
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for you review. John
Comment from Tatarka2
Perfect! This sounds exactly like what little ones might be thinking. Thanks for sharing this delightful piece of your life. I hope you and your wife are resting up, and getting ready to enjoy those beautiful grandchildren again just as soon as possible.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Perfect! This sounds exactly like what little ones might be thinking. Thanks for sharing this delightful piece of your life. I hope you and your wife are resting up, and getting ready to enjoy those beautiful grandchildren again just as soon as possible.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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We'll be seeing them
next month except this time at my son's house.
Thank you... John
Comment from Sasha
He's right, you cannot hide a piece (even a small one)in a glass of milk. This is just delightful and so precious. I love the photo of them too. They are priceless.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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He's right, you cannot hide a piece (even a small one)in a glass of milk. This is just delightful and so precious. I love the photo of them too. They are priceless.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you, valarie. I appreciate you and your time. John
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
My friend, you have an uncanny knack for writing stories that awakens the 'little kid' in all of us. Another lovely story regarding your grandkids.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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My friend, you have an uncanny knack for writing stories that awakens the 'little kid' in all of us. Another lovely story regarding your grandkids.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you, Schalk. How have you been?
John
