Poetry
Realism emitting pleasant rays is its true might.95 total reviews
Comment from mfowler
The message to aspiring poets that you have created here is both positive and interesting.. It gives insights into what good poetry can be and by its own example inspires. I hate acrostics, but you show that it can work as a poetic form with lyrical and intelligent effect. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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The message to aspiring poets that you have created here is both positive and interesting.. It gives insights into what good poetry can be and by its own example inspires. I hate acrostics, but you show that it can work as a poetic form with lyrical and intelligent effect. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging comments and Best of Luck Wishes.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from stephybs
You described poetry very well with minimal words but volumes of effort. Just as it should be, excellent piece with great art work that captures your poetry well.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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You described poetry very well with minimal words but volumes of effort. Just as it should be, excellent piece with great art work that captures your poetry well.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comments.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Poetry", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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"Poetry", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comments.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Sanku
I am not sure i agree with this -some of the free verses I have read were brilliant ,inspiring and edcative.Anyway that is just one opinion.
Your acrostic is very good captures the essence of poetry. good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I am not sure i agree with this -some of the free verses I have read were brilliant ,inspiring and edcative.Anyway that is just one opinion.
Your acrostic is very good captures the essence of poetry. good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging comments and Good Luck Wishes.
I was expecting such type of reaction/disagreement, particularly about The Author Notes, but glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from c_lucas
True poetry comes from the heart with strong emotional outlets. Your poem is very well written with a smooth flow of words and good imagery.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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True poetry comes from the heart with strong emotional outlets. Your poem is very well written with a smooth flow of words and good imagery.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comment.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You're welcome, RP. Charlie
Comment from meggie13
I Agree with what you say poetry should be. Not many people will read the kind of poem you describe. Poetry comes in many forms and that is what we have in Fan Story. Writers who write from their heart and to be understood by all whether it rhymes or not. I know what I like to read anything too complicated , beyond comprehension is not my cup of tea. That's why many poetry books are in stores with very few people to read them. Poetry should be written for the general public. This are my feelings and are not to offend you or anyone reading it.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I Agree with what you say poetry should be. Not many people will read the kind of poem you describe. Poetry comes in many forms and that is what we have in Fan Story. Writers who write from their heart and to be understood by all whether it rhymes or not. I know what I like to read anything too complicated , beyond comprehension is not my cup of tea. That's why many poetry books are in stores with very few people to read them. Poetry should be written for the general public. This are my feelings and are not to offend you or anyone reading it.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for reading my poem and expressing your free and frank views. I appreciate your straightforwardness.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are very welcome, RP. Meggie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Virtual six, indeed. Beautiful contest entry; good luck as this one is a winner. Extremely creative wording and presentation. Good luck and God bless, Deb
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Virtual six, indeed. Beautiful contest entry; good luck as this one is a winner. Extremely creative wording and presentation. Good luck and God bless, Deb
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging comments, Good Luck Wishes and Virtual SIX STARS.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from inside echo
It is definitely a positive and cheerful poem. It is well written and flows well. It has good rhyme. I disagree a little about your "containing" poetry. Art is creative and expressive, it is emotional, irrational, and without rules or borders. Entertaining, is similar to beauty, it is in the eye, or heart of the beholder. Just my opinion. Well done on your poem. Thank you for sharing.
echo
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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It is definitely a positive and cheerful poem. It is well written and flows well. It has good rhyme. I disagree a little about your "containing" poetry. Art is creative and expressive, it is emotional, irrational, and without rules or borders. Entertaining, is similar to beauty, it is in the eye, or heart of the beholder. Just my opinion. Well done on your poem. Thank you for sharing.
echo
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comments.
I was expecting such type of reaction/disagreement, particularly about The Author Notes, but glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, RP I really think you have the winner in this contest. Plain words defining the magic of poetry. True enough the younger generation will be doing well to be creative enough to follow in the footsteps of fine poets like you. blessings, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hi, RP I really think you have the winner in this contest. Plain words defining the magic of poetry. True enough the younger generation will be doing well to be creative enough to follow in the footsteps of fine poets like you. blessings, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hello Bob,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging comments and Best Wishes.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
I'll try my best to reach the desired level.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are entirely welcome, RP. (I have a new chapter posted too if you find time. Thanks, Bob
Comment from artisart4u
Your acrostic poem is very nice about poetry. When I saw the word realism,
I thought about, oh, not another -ism. I know the one the government (U.S.)favors is ideology (I think). When I had my course in short story writing/journalism I learned a lot about -ism, for instant, socialism and etc..
Poetry is a medium used to express ones feelings.
Your poem rhymes well and will always be appreciated among the more educated.
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Your acrostic poem is very nice about poetry. When I saw the word realism,
I thought about, oh, not another -ism. I know the one the government (U.S.)favors is ideology (I think). When I had my course in short story writing/journalism I learned a lot about -ism, for instant, socialism and etc..
Poetry is a medium used to express ones feelings.
Your poem rhymes well and will always be appreciated among the more educated.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging comments and Best Wishes backed by the most coveted Shiny SIX STARS.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
