Poetry
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Comment from rama devi
Love the theme. Indeed, my favorite kind of poetry is the enlightening kind. Fine flow and rhyming. Great rhyme pair of enlighten/brighten (with assonant I compounding the phonetics nicely) and fraternity and morality and positivity...nice themes.
Fine medley of P sounds with alliteration of P via poetry, positivity, peace,pleasant, poet and consonance of P with employ. Fine resonance of alliterated E with enlighten, emotions, emitting.
Thanks for inspiring inspiration.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
Love the theme. Indeed, my favorite kind of poetry is the enlightening kind. Fine flow and rhyming. Great rhyme pair of enlighten/brighten (with assonant I compounding the phonetics nicely) and fraternity and morality and positivity...nice themes.
Fine medley of P sounds with alliteration of P via poetry, positivity, peace,pleasant, poet and consonance of P with employ. Fine resonance of alliterated E with enlighten, emotions, emitting.
Thanks for inspiring inspiration.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 18-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Hi Rama Devi,
Please accept my heartfelt thanks for stopping by, reading the poem and passing so laudable comments.
~RP
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Most welcome and thanks :-)))
Comment from Joan E.
Your poem contains everything: alliteration, rhyme and a fine sensibility, all within an acrostic form. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
Your poem contains everything: alliteration, rhyme and a fine sensibility, all within an acrostic form. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Hi Joan,
Thank you very much for stopping by, passing so lovely comments and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello RP,
I am partial to traditional rhyming, metered poetry, myself.
Well crafted free verse is as compelling, though.
Good poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hope you've had a great week.
Sonali
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
Hello RP,
I am partial to traditional rhyming, metered poetry, myself.
Well crafted free verse is as compelling, though.
Good poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hope you've had a great week.
Sonali
Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Hello Sonali,
Thank you very much for stopping by, reading, reviewing, sharing your lovely views and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~RP.
Comment from DR DIP
I have a soft spot for rhyming poetic verse RP thanks for sharing this little acrostic poem for all of us to enjoy
dip
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
I have a soft spot for rhyming poetic verse RP thanks for sharing this little acrostic poem for all of us to enjoy
dip
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hello Dip,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comments.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
Comment from TOMORAL
Beautifully written and expressed Acrostic. You have designed a perfect entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. Best of luck with this awesome piece.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
Beautifully written and expressed Acrostic. You have designed a perfect entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. Best of luck with this awesome piece.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hello TOMORAL,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging comments and Best of Luck Wishes.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a nice weekend!
~RP.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so very true. Poetry can indeed lift you up to heights. It is the short version of writing that hits you hard and fast. They are stories in an extremely short version and that is why they are so powerful.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so very true. Poetry can indeed lift you up to heights. It is the short version of writing that hits you hard and fast. They are stories in an extremely short version and that is why they are so powerful.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comments.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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Take care
Comment from dwills
This is a well written poem about poetry. I like that it emphasizes the importance and power of poetry and its influences, while spelling out poetry. I am part of the youth that wants to help poetry reach new heights as well as inspire the world.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
This is a well written poem about poetry. I like that it emphasizes the importance and power of poetry and its influences, while spelling out poetry. I am part of the youth that wants to help poetry reach new heights as well as inspire the world.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Dwills,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comments.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Where there's a will, there's a way.
Best of Luck and have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are clear, strong and creative. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are clear, strong and creative. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging comments.
I'm glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from visionary1234
Oh hear hear, RP!!!! (though perhaps not always RHYME, as some free verse is totally spectacular!) Acrostics are really a challenge to do well, and you've pulled this one off quite delightfully!
:)Sharyn
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
Oh hear hear, RP!!!! (though perhaps not always RHYME, as some free verse is totally spectacular!) Acrostics are really a challenge to do well, and you've pulled this one off quite delightfully!
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Sharyn,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
I was expecting such type of reaction/disagreement, particularly about the Author Notes, but glad to realize that you enjoyed it with a healthy spirit and it's highly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Zue65
I respect your point of view and your love for rhymed verses but I don't agree that other forms of poetry like free verses should be viewed as junk forms. For me the content is much more important than its vessel. The message is what makes the poem shines, the rhythmical patterns are merely trimmings. But I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem. God bless.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
I respect your point of view and your love for rhymed verses but I don't agree that other forms of poetry like free verses should be viewed as junk forms. For me the content is much more important than its vessel. The message is what makes the poem shines, the rhythmical patterns are merely trimmings. But I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem. God bless.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Hello Friend,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging comments and Blessings.
I was expecting such type of reaction/disagreement, particularly about the Author Notes, but glad to realize that you enjoyed it and it's greatly appreciated.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.