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Ice Palace

A hotel built using snow and ice.

15 total reviews 
Comment from Tatarka2
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Wow. Congratulations on this well-deserved win. I've actually heard of this place, but I was never sure whether it really existed. Thanks so much for the entrancing description. It's listed as "general fiction," so I'm guessing you didn't really spend your honeymoon there, right?

 Comment Written 26-May-2015


reply by the author on 26-May-2015
    No, I didn't. The story is fiction, but the place is very real. Google Hotel de Glace to look at some amazing pictures. Thanks.
Comment from mommerry
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This story is well-written and the description of the hotel had me shivering. Since I find it difficult to stay warm enough in Iowa winters, in spite of how glamorous this hotel sounds, I doubt I will travel to enter it. Wonderful description, however.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    I don't blame you. It is cold. Thanks.
Comment from MelB
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This sounds like a really magical place. Wow, more than 50 workers and over 6 weeks to build! That's a lot of work. The slide sounds fun! Very romantic to have another proposal in the chapel. I enjoyed reading about this place.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    Thanks so much. heck it out on Google.
Comment from gazzagodbod
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love as the penguins do it sounds fun nothing like a rummage in a joined together sleeping bag i would think sounds like a wonderful place
congratulations xxgazzaxx

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    It is considered one of the top ten romantic places in North America to get married. Don't ask me what the other nine are. LOL Thanks.
Comment from K. Lorraine
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I've heard about these ice palace places...
What an incredible experience you had...
And it must have been a beautiful wedding too...
Nicely written...
Very descriptive...
Definitely a different entry for the contest...
Wonderful!
Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    The story was fiction, the place very real and you can see pictures if you Google Hotel de Glace. Thank you.
reply by K. Lorraine on 25-May-2015
    It was wonderful regardless whether the story was fact or fiction. I've seen documentaries on ice dwellings over the world. A very different way to write about the prompt.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Sounds like an enjoyable little place to visit, once. Easy to follow story line. Action packed and flows smoothly. Descriptively well written.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    Thank you. The pictures are stunning if you care to google Hotel de Glace.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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A very good morning to you. I usually try to visit the posts which feature my artwork, so thank you for using it, my best to you in your writing. Loyd

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    I have used your photography so often, it makes me wonder if we see things in the same way through a lens. I never notice the artist's name until I make my selection, and I'm no longer surprised when I'm attracted to your images. Thank you.
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 26-May-2015
    That's very kind of you poet.
    When you can, please check out my written work here on Fanstory, I would be grateful.
    Loyd C. Taylor, sr.
Comment from jpduck
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Very nicely done, I thought. Congratulations. I knew about the ice hotel in Scandinavia; I didn't realise there was another one in Canada.

A couple of SPAGs. (Square brackets indicate suggested deletions, and asterisks, suggested insertions):

'every hair on a large moose carving looked real.' (Insert a blank line after this to mark the new paragraph).

'we'd drank before[,]. (Also 'drank' should be 'drunk' as it is the past participle).


Adrian


 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    There are many pictures on line. This was the 15th year the hotel has been erected and each year, there is an increase in business. Some magazine or list included it as one of the top ten romantic spots to get married.

    Thanks for the alerts.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. This was simply magical and since I have always wanted to see this place your wonderful descriptions made it feel like I have. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    There are lots of pictures on line if you Google hotel de Glace. Thanks.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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good job! this is a fascinating story but I can't see in my mind what it looks like. I guess I am having a hard time figuring out if you are serious or not. How can someone live inside an ice palace?

 Comment Written 25-May-2015


reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    You can google Hotel de Glace and see many pictures as this is an international tourist site. Rates for a room are $400 per night and up. But I understand; if you can't accept the concept in your mind, it is hard to visualize.. Thanks/
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 25-May-2015
    I checked the pictures on line. It's amazing!