Magical Puffins
who'd ha' thought???66 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
A fun, silly read full of alliterative flourish. Maybe you should team-up your puffins with Phylis' penguins. That would be one heck of a song. Congrats on the win. Maybe I'll start feeding the robins threaded bobbins of string cheese.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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A fun, silly read full of alliterative flourish. Maybe you should team-up your puffins with Phylis' penguins. That would be one heck of a song. Congrats on the win. Maybe I'll start feeding the robins threaded bobbins of string cheese.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I was thinking about that Ed ! we could send everyone nuts!
:)S
Comment from Joy Graham
Very cute :) Congratulations on winning yet another contest. You are an excellent poet to learn from and enjoy. Love all your rhymes and near rhyme combos. I especially get a chuckle out of flexible, mixable, Mexican. great use out of the required words that felt quite natural. You're really on a roll lately.
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Very cute :) Congratulations on winning yet another contest. You are an excellent poet to learn from and enjoy. Love all your rhymes and near rhyme combos. I especially get a chuckle out of flexible, mixable, Mexican. great use out of the required words that felt quite natural. You're really on a roll lately.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I dare you to say that first line fast Joy!!!! Thank you my dear! Great to be back for a little while at least ...
:)Sharyn
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you make me smile, dear lady :) my daughter and her husband just got back from Hawaii. They went to Oahu. Said they'd like to try a quieter Island next time. I told them about your place. Shoulda listened to me, huh?
Comment from sibhus
Ha, ha, oh this is so much, and so inventive. What a great way to use the words in the contest. This was an original way to use such a variety of words that, until you put them together seem to have nothing in common. What a great poem, and a very well deserved win.
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Ha, ha, oh this is so much, and so inventive. What a great way to use the words in the contest. This was an original way to use such a variety of words that, until you put them together seem to have nothing in common. What a great poem, and a very well deserved win.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much sibhus - I had fun with this one! :)Sharyn
Comment from donalola
This beautiful Visionary 1234!
I am glad I chose to read it. It is almost magical what you did with the words given and the Mexican muffins!
Congratulations on your creativity!
Donbalola
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This beautiful Visionary 1234!
I am glad I chose to read it. It is almost magical what you did with the words given and the Mexican muffins!
Congratulations on your creativity!
Donbalola
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much Donalola! :)Sharyn
Comment from Jacob Collins
It makes you wonder what must go through some animals minds when they are locked in cages in zoos. I really enjoyed the rhyme in this piece, visionary, your writing flowed well and I could certainly see why it won the contest, congratulations. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
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It makes you wonder what must go through some animals minds when they are locked in cages in zoos. I really enjoyed the rhyme in this piece, visionary, your writing flowed well and I could certainly see why it won the contest, congratulations. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much Jacob! :)Sharyn
Comment from scd41
Congratulation! You deserved the win. You have used the specified words so well that the poem flows smoothly. You are a wordsmith.
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Congratulation! You deserved the win. You have used the specified words so well that the poem flows smoothly. You are a wordsmith.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Thank you so much scd! :)Sharyn
Comment from liz10240
Lol- This is so cute. I se why it was a contest winner. I like the hilighted required words, great usage as well. Children would love this along with adults. Great job!
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Lol- This is so cute. I se why it was a contest winner. I like the hilighted required words, great usage as well. Children would love this along with adults. Great job!
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Bless you Liz! :)S
Comment from daymanrayne
The picture was cute and very like I want to take them home and pet them like the cat in Austin Powers. I love how you highlighted each word
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The picture was cute and very like I want to take them home and pet them like the cat in Austin Powers. I love how you highlighted each word
Comment Written 29-May-2015
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Thank you Dayman! :)Sharyn
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Sharyn - great poem and a worthy winner. And how efficient are you to highlight those necessary words that had to be included in the poem. You certainly saved me having to check and re-check to see if they were all present and correct. You did remarkably well with what I think was quite a difficult mix of words. But then, having reading your other work, I am, figuratively speaking, in the presence of someone who has poetry flowing freely through her veins. Warm regards Dorothy xx
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Hi Sharyn - great poem and a worthy winner. And how efficient are you to highlight those necessary words that had to be included in the poem. You certainly saved me having to check and re-check to see if they were all present and correct. You did remarkably well with what I think was quite a difficult mix of words. But then, having reading your other work, I am, figuratively speaking, in the presence of someone who has poetry flowing freely through her veins. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Bless you, Dorothy - too much time on my hands at the moment I think - nothing better than Mexican muffins to cavort with!
Bless you!
Sharyn :)
ps: but I DID get someone ELSE to do my housework for me today!
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You lazy so-and-so Sharyn. Telling me you have too much time on your hands today, then you go on to say you had someone else do your housework. Tut! LOL. Good for you. Dxx
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You lazy so-and-so Sharyn. Telling me you have too much time on your hands today, then you go on to say you had someone else do your housework. Tut! LOL. Good for you. Dxx
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yep - total slob - c'est moi!
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et moi aussi! LOL
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was brilliant, my friend, and a worthy winner. Huge congratulations, I missed the voting, so sorry. I had trouble to start with when I tried to read it aloud and fast, what a tongue twister that was! LOL, it was really funny. Well done, Sharyn! xsx Sandra
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That was brilliant, my friend, and a worthy winner. Huge congratulations, I missed the voting, so sorry. I had trouble to start with when I tried to read it aloud and fast, what a tongue twister that was! LOL, it was really funny. Well done, Sharyn! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I have trouble with it myself Sandra - I think that's why I did it!!!
:)S
