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My saviour.86 total reviews
Comment from alexisleech
Both your words and your image create an excellent experience for the reader. So many wonderful lines that not only speak about faith, but mirror the thoughts of many.
I especially like the reference to 'self' dying, so that you can see the Lord. With all the problems of getting older, it is beautiful to think it's all worth while because the process makes us closer to our ultimate journey.
Alexis x
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Both your words and your image create an excellent experience for the reader. So many wonderful lines that not only speak about faith, but mirror the thoughts of many.
I especially like the reference to 'self' dying, so that you can see the Lord. With all the problems of getting older, it is beautiful to think it's all worth while because the process makes us closer to our ultimate journey.
Alexis x
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Thanks so much Alexis, for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from rjuselius
this is yet another exquisite piece of poetic art dear roy! i immensely enjoy your poems concerning faith. they are so well presented and have a great philosophical edge and sentiment!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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this is yet another exquisite piece of poetic art dear roy! i immensely enjoy your poems concerning faith. they are so well presented and have a great philosophical edge and sentiment!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Thanks so much dear Rebekka, you are a gem, once again your support is invaluable, and your exceptional rating and stars also, comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from Janet7053
Wow, this rings melodious to my heart and mind. Every word is truth but there is a line that captivated me.
My dream is self that's dying,
so I can know my Lord, Beautiful!
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Wow, this rings melodious to my heart and mind. Every word is truth but there is a line that captivated me.
My dream is self that's dying,
so I can know my Lord, Beautiful!
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Thanks Janet for this beautiful, heartfelt review, my blessings Roy
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wonderful job on this lovely poem of faith, Roy. The meter and rhymes are nearly perfect. You might change PLANS to PLAN, which can mean a whole life plan. But it's fine just as it is. :)
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Wonderful job on this lovely poem of faith, Roy. The meter and rhymes are nearly perfect. You might change PLANS to PLAN, which can mean a whole life plan. But it's fine just as it is. :)
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks so much Phyllis for this fine, thoughtful review and comments will look into the suggestion blessings, Roy.
Comment from ameen786
Poet's deep conviction in faith is superbly reflected in this inspirational verse with meaningful words and excellent rhyming. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Poet's deep conviction in faith is superbly reflected in this inspirational verse with meaningful words and excellent rhyming. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks so much for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
So spiritually uplifting and it reads as though a prayer.
Beautifully written and presented.
It flows with a smooth cadence and clear message.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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So spiritually uplifting and it reads as though a prayer.
Beautifully written and presented.
It flows with a smooth cadence and clear message.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thank you Shirley for the delightful review, uplifting comments and exceptional rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from MelB
A wonderful piece on faith, hope, and love. I like the line about God's love being like a mountain, broad and wide. I think it is hard for us to fathom how great His love for us really is.
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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A wonderful piece on faith, hope, and love. I like the line about God's love being like a mountain, broad and wide. I think it is hard for us to fathom how great His love for us really is.
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks so much Melissa, for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome Roy!
Comment from pattipac
Roy, you have written a lovely poem of faith built not no things of this world that can be seen, but of heavenly truths that must be seen with the eyes of faith.
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Roy, you have written a lovely poem of faith built not no things of this world that can be seen, but of heavenly truths that must be seen with the eyes of faith.
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks so much Pat, for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from valerieellis
Excellent! As always, your rhyme and rhythm flowed smoothly and your words were encouraging and inspirational. This is EXACTLY what I needed! Thank you for sharing. God bless :-)
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Excellent! As always, your rhyme and rhythm flowed smoothly and your words were encouraging and inspirational. This is EXACTLY what I needed! Thank you for sharing. God bless :-)
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks so much Valerie, for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Roy,
What a beautiful poem this is. I loved every word of it, which you have written so well. The scripture verse you used to go with it is also perfect. Well, as a matter of fact the whole thing is perfect.
Kat
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Hi Roy,
What a beautiful poem this is. I loved every word of it, which you have written so well. The scripture verse you used to go with it is also perfect. Well, as a matter of fact the whole thing is perfect.
Kat
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks Kat for the delightful, uplifting review, comments and exceptional rating and stars, I am grateful, blessings, Roy.
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Blessings to you, Roy.
