Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Faith is also used with reference to human beings having faith in one another, without that there can be no trust. This is sadly lacking nowadays. Good spiritual message with well chosen words and rhymes. In verse 2, the verb to bide means something different, it is used in expression 'bide one's time'. You meant abide=to dwell/stay. You therefore need to put an apostrophe to show abbreviation: 'bide. Enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks Faye, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Captain Kangaroo

Excellent

This poem is almost lyrical in its content and emotion. It definitely feels more like a beautiful, romantic song than anything else. I love the imagery and the feeling it invokes. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

Comment from emkoutny

Excellent

Like the metaphors used in the poem and the picture shows the grace and majesty of god and his love. The strength of your faith is obvious in every well-chosen word.

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Up lifting. Full of spiritual wisdom, but is the world listening? Some are. It's a message worth writing and telling the world how beautiful it all is. My favorite is the second verse. Great write! Les

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks Les, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Donovan

Excellent

You are a stalwart of your faith and belief. Your poetry leaves no doubt of your conviction and determination to be true the the faith. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Lovely, I really liked it and I think it is very well written, although I am no expert on poetry. I would wish I had your faith, but it is good that you do. Well done. Ulla

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks Ulla, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

My heartsong, indeed that is a beautiful expressed heartfelt song, very nice rhyming and flow. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Lakeport.

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

reply by lakeport on 27-May-2015

you are very welcome,lakeport

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

I don't know if this is exactly, light, but it sure is well written and shows your deep seeded faith. Very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks Christelle, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Beautiful photo! Another wonderful work of art Roy. :) I was out all day yesterday enjoying the day off & now I'm back to work. Reading this just brightened my morning. Thanks for sharing. This is a good way to start my day. Your talent always amazes me.
Thank you,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks Shana, for this wonderful review, wonderful comments and exceptional rating and stars, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

This is a lovely faith poem. I feel inspired and uplifted for having read it :) your words are simple yet the meaning is powerful and deep. I was able to read it and understand it and feel inspired. Love the title. You give me much to think about today.

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks Joy, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.