My heartsong.
My saviour.86 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
'my dream is self that is dying'-aptly said because where there is ego ,the light from will be blocked and the true experience of God can not be achieved.
Very good poem of faith and belief.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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'my dream is self that is dying'-aptly said because where there is ego ,the light from will be blocked and the true experience of God can not be achieved.
Very good poem of faith and belief.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thanks, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.
Comment from c_lucas
The spiritual bond of love connects the believer to his deity. The strength of his faith keeps him on the right path. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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The spiritual bond of love connects the believer to his deity. The strength of his faith keeps him on the right path. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
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Thanks Charlie, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome, Roy. Charlie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Virtual six, instead! Beautiful presentation of a well penned poem. "My heart song, God's love, My dream and Faith binds" wonderful way to start each stanza... Loved your inspirational Christian poem. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming, Deb
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Virtual six, instead! Beautiful presentation of a well penned poem. "My heart song, God's love, My dream and Faith binds" wonderful way to start each stanza... Loved your inspirational Christian poem. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming, Deb
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thanks Deb, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Roy, I love this poem. It reads like an old fashioned hymn, which I happen to love. I like the rhyme scheme that you used. It made the poem very easy to read and relate to. I am with you. "Faith does bind it all together." Great job, Shirley
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Dear Roy, I love this poem. It reads like an old fashioned hymn, which I happen to love. I like the rhyme scheme that you used. It made the poem very easy to read and relate to. I am with you. "Faith does bind it all together." Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 27-May-2015
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Thanks Shirley, , for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Free_Roxanne
Very exceptional work here. It would take me hours to write something like this. Such flowing verse, and colorful pictures you paint. I like the picture you chose for this fine poem. I'm so glad this site was discovered by both of us.
The only problem is that one gets addicted to it and wants to sit and watch the sun rise with no sleep.
Sincerely,
Free_Roxanne
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Very exceptional work here. It would take me hours to write something like this. Such flowing verse, and colorful pictures you paint. I like the picture you chose for this fine poem. I'm so glad this site was discovered by both of us.
The only problem is that one gets addicted to it and wants to sit and watch the sun rise with no sleep.
Sincerely,
Free_Roxanne
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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You're right about the addiction , but I think that can wane in time. Thanks Raxanne, for this wonderful review, great comments and exceptional rating, And stars, blessings, Roy.
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Keep up the excellent work, Roy.
Free_Roxanne
Comment from Mastery
"God's Love is like a mountain,
the view is broad and wide,
But growth is in the valley,
where faith and wisdom bide!"
Wonderful poetry, my friend. Very inspiring, Roy. Bob
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"God's Love is like a mountain,
the view is broad and wide,
But growth is in the valley,
where faith and wisdom bide!"
Wonderful poetry, my friend. Very inspiring, Roy. Bob
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Thanks , for this uplifting review, comments and exceptional rating and stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from 4hisglory
I like that - the heartsong is my Savior and the heartbeat is my purpose, vision, & dream planned by God.
I've never thought of faith having eyes though.
Nicely written poem with good flow. Blessings, LaVonne
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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I like that - the heartsong is my Savior and the heartbeat is my purpose, vision, & dream planned by God.
I've never thought of faith having eyes though.
Nicely written poem with good flow. Blessings, LaVonne
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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It sees into realms the naked doesn't see, thanks LaVonne, for the wonderful review and comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from victor 66
I am not religious, but there's nothing wrong with faith if it gives you comfort. No, I don't follow your belief that you've expressed in your poem. But it's still a good poem, even to someone like me. It has depth, feeling and rhythm that's pretty hard to argue with. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I am not religious, but there's nothing wrong with faith if it gives you comfort. No, I don't follow your belief that you've expressed in your poem. But it's still a good poem, even to someone like me. It has depth, feeling and rhythm that's pretty hard to argue with. Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Thanks, Victor, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.
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You are most welcome, Roy.
Comment from nomi338
We have a battle with the hard learned habit of I can do it myself, the thought that you are somehow not a man if you ask for help. There are many things in this world that are beyond mankind's ability to change or fix. Therefore man must humble himself to bend his knees and approach his God and ask for His assistance, he must then exhibit the necessary faith to not only believe that he will receive the requested help but that it is worth waiting for when it does not immediately come.
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We have a battle with the hard learned habit of I can do it myself, the thought that you are somehow not a man if you ask for help. There are many things in this world that are beyond mankind's ability to change or fix. Therefore man must humble himself to bend his knees and approach his God and ask for His assistance, he must then exhibit the necessary faith to not only believe that he will receive the requested help but that it is worth waiting for when it does not immediately come.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
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Thanks, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh for a six.
Absolutely wonderful.
The last stanza pulls it together and binds the piece with God's love.
We are standing in His grace, and through that we know he exists...in pure faith.
Very nicely done
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Oh for a six.
Absolutely wonderful.
The last stanza pulls it together and binds the piece with God's love.
We are standing in His grace, and through that we know he exists...in pure faith.
Very nicely done
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thanks Barb, for this great review, comments and support, blessings, Roy.
