2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "You're my Other Half"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
6 total reviews
Comment from reconciled
I think that is my better have...but who cares...as long as you are as one and happy...very nicely written...and good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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I think that is my better have...but who cares...as long as you are as one and happy...very nicely written...and good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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thank you for your excellent review
Comment from TPAC
Best Wishes Lovely sentiment conveyed by poet capturing precious moment of change simple clear cut and from heart calm and meaningful Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Best Wishes Lovely sentiment conveyed by poet capturing precious moment of change simple clear cut and from heart calm and meaningful Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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thank you for the excellent review and kind words
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct syllable and line count. You deliver a truly sweet reflection on love and marriage with your well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct syllable and line count. You deliver a truly sweet reflection on love and marriage with your well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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thank you for your excellente and kind words
Comment from angel123
Your poem is nice and I like your title. Your artwork choice goes well with your poem and it flows well. Good luck in the contest.
Angel123
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Your poem is nice and I like your title. Your artwork choice goes well with your poem and it flows well. Good luck in the contest.
Angel123
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you angel, I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from Glasstruth
Love is the greatest gift one can give, and one that makes for a peaceful, serene way of life. The 'other half' shows that we need somebody else to be complete. Wonderfully written. Les
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Love is the greatest gift one can give, and one that makes for a peaceful, serene way of life. The 'other half' shows that we need somebody else to be complete. Wonderfully written. Les
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you for your excellent review and for the kind words
Comment from inside echo
A very sweet poem. You met the requirements of the 5-7-5 syllable count. It also fits well into the theme required. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
echo
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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A very sweet poem. You met the requirements of the 5-7-5 syllable count. It also fits well into the theme required. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
echo
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you for an excellent review
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You are welcome.
