Comment from rmj09

Excellent

The focus Sebastian and the lack of the camera. The storyline development Blaze gets Sebastian away from the mental hospital. After Lucifer played games with her head. Bash appears to be helping her only to keep away from the FBI.
The hook will his grabbing Blazes arm cause an accident and early delivery?
Keep on writing.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 26-May-2015

Thanks so much, Rita. No problems thankfully. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

LOL, I must admit I got quite a chuckle how Sebastian took poor old Blaze on a run around with the license plates. That was most entertaining and the kind of side track I thoroughly enjoy. It exposes lots about both characters.

No camera? No changey backey. Sucks to be you Sebastian.

Another most entertaining chapter Phyllis. When are you ever gonna thrown in a mistake so I can catch it? Hmmmm?

Exceptional, darling.

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Thank you my dear Gloria for the most glorious review and shimmering six stars. So glad you enjoyed Sebastian torturing Blaze. If he hadn't been on tranquillizers, he might have done a lot worse. :)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hi Phyllis,

This is a nice, fast paced chapter with lots of action from start to finish. I can't imagine how Blaze can change him back without the use of the camera. But, I'm assuming YOU can, lol.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Thanks so much, Lou. God told Blaze she could do it, so she can... she just doesn't know how yet. :)

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

How is Blaze going to turn Sebastian into the senator again, if she doesn't have the camera. I can't wait for that post. This is another good job of writing.

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Thanks again, Barbara. She's counting on God's assurance that she can do it. :)

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

This was a fun chapter. It moves along nicely as she keeps a few paces ahead of "the FBI."

I'm interested to see where this is going next.

Thank you!

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Thank you so much, Ray. :)

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I'm eager to find out if Blaze can
change him back without the camera.


(")Maybe, maybe not, but your car has


so close to the van that [[the agent]](he) would've - here - since you've said "the agent" in the sentence before - might I suggest "he"

Most enjoyable, Phyllis.

Margaret

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Margaret, thanks for reading and for finding the errors. Seems I always have a missing quote or an extra one. :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

For a smart guy, that was a pretty dumb move. Parking the car on the sidewalk is a good way to attract attention. Let's hope she didn't hit anyone. And of course Luke knows who Blaze is and where to find her. Funny she didn't recognize him. I suspect she will soon enough.

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Thanks, Cindy. Blaze will figure out who the FBI agent really is soon enough. :)

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I kept wondering about the license plates too. Very effective and believable explanation. Well crafted dialogue. Can't wait to see Blaze pull this off.

 Comment Written 22-May-2015

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reply by the author on 22-May-2015

Thanks, Shari. Of course she'll succeed, but then what will Seb do?

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Luke can find her, plates or not. H ope she gets him changed before Luke finds them. Surely they'll figure out he's the phoney agent. And what will Sebastian do, go back to his lover?

 Comment Written 22-May-2015

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reply by the author on 22-May-2015

Thanks, Carolyn. Lorna has moved to another city to be with Theo's friend she met the night she and Blaze went dancing. Poor Seb will be disappointed, to say the least. But they were bad for each other, encouraging each other's corruption. More on that in the next chapter.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is great. Blaze still doesn't know that it was Luke in the guise of an FBI man. There's the danger that he may have gotten the license plate of the car Blaze is driving and be able to track them down. Sebastian comes too, although he says he's just been playing possum. Understandably, Sebastian is confused about why Blaze would want to rescue him. It is hard for him to understand the demon-ex-demon business. Sebastian is really worried when Blaze reveals she no longer has the camera. Will she be strong enough to return him to his former self on her own? Great work. judi

 Comment Written 22-May-2015

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reply by the author on 22-May-2015

Thanks so much, Judi. :)

reply by judiverse on 23-May-2015

You're very welcome. judi