The Room Is Filled With Tension Toda
From book of Resurrection Poems11 total reviews
Comment from Oatmeal
DANPALD,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth.
There was no SPAG.
look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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DANPALD,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth.
There was no SPAG.
look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello danpaid very good clear poem of what happened on Pentecost I liked the part about Mary
A gentle recitation comes from the lips of Mary,
Softly her voice does rise, giving the story.
She turns to Simon Peter, to read the passage clearly.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Hello danpaid very good clear poem of what happened on Pentecost I liked the part about Mary
A gentle recitation comes from the lips of Mary,
Softly her voice does rise, giving the story.
She turns to Simon Peter, to read the passage clearly.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Comment from benoenose
A biblical poem with theological insights expressed. Though the Pentecost event of the Christian celebration of spirit filled occasion of dispersal echoed, the poet admires this event to reach the gospel. Read by all those spiritual leaders and the faithful believers.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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A biblical poem with theological insights expressed. Though the Pentecost event of the Christian celebration of spirit filled occasion of dispersal echoed, the poet admires this event to reach the gospel. Read by all those spiritual leaders and the faithful believers.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Comment from padumachitta
Hi..a good poem for this high Christian holiday, a time of change and reflection and hope.
As a non Christiona i am enjoying the many poems that are coming out and learning a bit more about my fellow humans.
Thanks,
padumachitta
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi..a good poem for this high Christian holiday, a time of change and reflection and hope.
As a non Christiona i am enjoying the many poems that are coming out and learning a bit more about my fellow humans.
Thanks,
padumachitta
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Comment from lalajovanoski
remarkable! so spiritual, emotional, and a powerful message. excellent picture selection to compliment this amazing write. you are extremely talented. i very much enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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remarkable! so spiritual, emotional, and a powerful message. excellent picture selection to compliment this amazing write. you are extremely talented. i very much enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for sharing!
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great poem of Pentecost with a twist featuring Mary, the Mother. The twelve tribes were represented with the 120 - 10 x 12. The apostles and other believers. The church became bold after the fire of the Holy Spirit, the promised teacher. They spoke in tongues and went out to preach in different languages. The presence of the Holy Spirit made the appear drunk. It was by the spirt of the Lord. Great poem to remind us of Pentecost. i pray that we will rise up and pray as a nation. We can start in a circle like they did on Pentecost. Luke 24 says that Jesus reminded the travelers that the Bible is about Jesus. God bless! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Great poem of Pentecost with a twist featuring Mary, the Mother. The twelve tribes were represented with the 120 - 10 x 12. The apostles and other believers. The church became bold after the fire of the Holy Spirit, the promised teacher. They spoke in tongues and went out to preach in different languages. The presence of the Holy Spirit made the appear drunk. It was by the spirt of the Lord. Great poem to remind us of Pentecost. i pray that we will rise up and pray as a nation. We can start in a circle like they did on Pentecost. Luke 24 says that Jesus reminded the travelers that the Bible is about Jesus. God bless! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Comment from petalangela
Doubt now dispelled the are filled with the urge to share the fire. The warmth the passion and the knowledge. A piece of God now with in them . Is this not all mankind seeks in order to achieve piece
Once again your writing is evoking thought to a doubter of the faith.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Doubt now dispelled the are filled with the urge to share the fire. The warmth the passion and the knowledge. A piece of God now with in them . Is this not all mankind seeks in order to achieve piece
Once again your writing is evoking thought to a doubter of the faith.
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Comment from TAB_that's me
I never really understood Pentecost until about a year ago. This tells the story very well. Nice poem, easy to read.
Teresa
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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I never really understood Pentecost until about a year ago. This tells the story very well. Nice poem, easy to read.
Teresa
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Comment from jim lawler
A very nice read, It's well written and interesting. Is this something that took place after the death of Jesus. The characters resemble the biblical characters back then. It's a nice presentation. Good luck and God bless! Jim
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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A very nice read, It's well written and interesting. Is this something that took place after the death of Jesus. The characters resemble the biblical characters back then. It's a nice presentation. Good luck and God bless! Jim
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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You're so very welcome and again, God bless! Jim
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. You do a terrific job of telling us a story with your words. You take a familiar story and make it your own. Very good read.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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I thought this was well written. You do a terrific job of telling us a story with your words. You take a familiar story and make it your own. Very good read.
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Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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