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Comment from TAB_that's me
The impact that someone unknown can have on us just through a news story is amazing. This is wonderful poem you honoring those who have died by the storms of the seas.
Teresa
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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The impact that someone unknown can have on us just through a news story is amazing. This is wonderful poem you honoring those who have died by the storms of the seas.
Teresa
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Thank you Teresa for this kind and complimentary review.Thank you for this excellent review. I am most grateful.
Comment from Treischel
A haunting aspect in this poem that captures the sadness and tragedy of the Fukushima Tsunami event. I believe the 5-3-5 format is called a Luna. I was intrigued here by you juxtapositions throughout: could have/ could not, you drowned/I live. The 4-4-8-8 stanzas too were very effective. Lots of feeling well conveyed.
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A haunting aspect in this poem that captures the sadness and tragedy of the Fukushima Tsunami event. I believe the 5-3-5 format is called a Luna. I was intrigued here by you juxtapositions throughout: could have/ could not, you drowned/I live. The 4-4-8-8 stanzas too were very effective. Lots of feeling well conveyed.
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Comment Written 20-May-2015
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Thank you so much for this detailed review. You have it all there. I thought the Luna was 3-5-3. Not that it matters - a rose by any other name etc.
Comment from Glasstruth
We're like ants, never knowing when we'll be squashed and sent to that afterlife. Nice flow and deep emotions throughout. Well penned. Les
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We're like ants, never knowing when we'll be squashed and sent to that afterlife. Nice flow and deep emotions throughout. Well penned. Les
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Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Thank you for being so quick on the draw with this kind review.
