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Tiny Tales of Terror

Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Unfortunate Mr. Watson"
Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction

67 total reviews 
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Dean, thanks for visiting my website. Appreciate that very much. Now about this little tale of yours. Not sure I would want to be Mr. Watson. Looks like he has a whole lot of painful pleasure to be going through for a very long time to come. Story well told and like the little touches of humor along the way. Toche pussycat!

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks, Brett. I'm really pleased that you liked the story. Thank you very much for reading. :)
    ~Dean
Comment from robina1978
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This should get a next six but then I run out too soon. Poor Mr. Watson indeed. He is the victim of a company that freezes bodies, first with many failures. Now Watson is still awake screaming, but nobody hears him.

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    No worries, Ine. No one's given this a six, in fact, so you're not alone, lol.
    I'm just glad you liked this tiny twisted tale of terror. I appreciate your continued support of all of the authors in this book.
    Thanks again for reading. ~Dean
Comment from Scarbrems
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The stuff of which nightmares are made. Thanks so much, Dean, now I'll have dreams about being frozen alive, as well as being buried alive.

It's a skill, getting a complete story in such a short piece, and you've mastered it.

The whole thing kind of reminded about a discussion I had with someone about how to kill a lobster. He recommended freezing it. I said I couldn't, because I'd be imagining it tapping on the freezer door!

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for supporting this series, Sarkems. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say that we greatly appreciate it. ~Dean
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Dean - another cringe-making piece of writing from you. A new take on being buried alive - scream - but frozen alive!!! What a horrible thought. What makes it a frightening story is that the victim hears them talking but cannot make himself heard. Enjoyable read. Still.... he wouldn't be alive for long once encased in ice. LOL. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for supporting this series, Dorothy. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say we greatly appreciate it. ~Dean
Comment from kriver
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Hi Dean,
This story gives anew meaning to the words Chilled not Frozen.
This is such a short write.
It is difficult to review.
What there was of it the story line is good.
The character development,
dialogue and interaction for
so short a piece are good.
The scene description is clear.
Considering the limitations of the write it is done well.

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for supporting this series, kriver. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say we sincerely appreciate it. ~Dean
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Another excellent Tiny Tale of Terror, Dean. What a nightmare that would be. I read a book about a man who was buried alive, no one saw the tear escape from his eye. He had been drugged to the point his heart beat didn't register anymore. He was dug up later as a zombie! Your story is worse, I think, that has put me off operations and such like for good! :) xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for supporting this series, Sandra. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say that we truly appreciate it.
    Thanks again for reading~Dean
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Poor old Mr Watson knowing everything going on around him but frozen in time. I don't know how you come up with such a variety of scary stories, I'm still trying to think of one. Well done.

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for supporting this series, Pearl. Your contribution -- when ready -- will be fantastic, I'm sure. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say that we truly appreciate it.
    Thanks again for reading~Dean
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Oh you did it again.
Nicely done, no problems noted.
Scary and yet just a handful of words.
The talent you have in that pen is wonderful.
Great job

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for your continued support of this series, Barb. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say that we truly appreciate it.
    Thanks again for reading~Dean
Comment from krys123
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Dean;
-Horrifically honorable and so very well written that I was not ready for the ending it all. Not only did take me by surprise but it sounded so very ghoulish to know that he was still awake while his blood pressure was rising toward unspeakable heights.
-You started off the writing very simple and slowly as beyond to understanding that something terrible was going to happen but I did know was already happening, for he was awake at the whole time.
-Bravo my friend, bravo.
-Always the pictures really cement the reality and complements the writing so well.
-Thank you for sharing and posting this Dean and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for your continued support of this series, Alex. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say that we truly appreciate it.
    Thanks again for reading~Dean
reply by krys123 on 17-May-2015
    You are so sincerely welcome, Dean.
    Alex
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Now that is a true horror story. I think that being buried alive, or, in this case, frozen alive, would be the scariest situation ever. I can't even sit still for five minutes without having to do something, like playing around on the computer. I can't imagine not having anything to do, and no one even knowing it!
Rhonda

 Comment Written 17-May-2015


reply by the author on 17-May-2015
    Thanks very much for reading, and for your continued support of this series, Rhonda. I think I speak for all the authors in this book who have contributed when I say, We truly appreciate it!
    Thanks again for reading~Dean
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 17-May-2015
    Well, thank you. There's some real talent in your book. Can't wait to get hold of the finished work.