Comment from Muffins

Excellent

Great ending!! You've written Lucifer with a little bit of brains this chapter. He doesn't behave like a dumb ass, but I'm not holding my breath that this common sense will last.

 Comment Written 19-May-2015

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reply by the author on 19-May-2015

Thanks very much, Muffins. Luke is pretending to be Carmine's guy, and Lenny knows him, so he's talking the way Alex would really talk. He's a great mimic... one way in which the Devil tricks us. :)

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Luke is getting closer to finding Sebastian while
Blaze is trying to figure out how to change
him back to normal without using the power of the camera.
Nancy

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thanks again, Nancy. :)

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Now, that's a cliff hanger, Phyllis! Good job.

So, Luke is on the loose with fake ID. What could be worse? You're setting us up for one helluva caper. An agent of God and the devil himself.

It's the little things that crack me up. Like this:
"Right. About time I got a promotion." Lucifer puffed out his chest as if the compliment were for him. (Too funny!)

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thanks so much, Marietta. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

LOL, man alive Lucifer is having a bit of trouble with muscle man he's morphed in to. Too funny smacking his head and great play with the looney bin too!

Oh that is indeed a no no using the camera again. That camera is one bad influence.

Uh oh. It looks like Blaze is about to run over the wrong dude.

Super job, Phyllis. I love the whole scene.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thank you so very much for the glorious sixer, Glorious. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Ok. You and Jax must have teamed up today. Both of you have left me with cliffhanger endings! Oh well I will look forward to your next post. Good job. 8-)

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Sorry about that, but thanks for putting up with it. LOL! :)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Phyllis,

Another great chapter of your book. AGAIN you have me wondering what's going to happen next. You are so great at writing books. I've only done a very few in my life. If I could only think of something good to write I might try another book.
Nah, I hardly get any poetry written with all the replies, reviews, and messages I have to answer. LOL

Kat

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Thanks so much, Kat. :)

reply by MizKat on 17-May-2015

You're so welcome.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You left a fantastic hook. I am guessing she saw Luke, but it could also be something else. I can't wait to find out. Luke can't be trusted but he can be tricked.

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Thanks so much, Barbara. :)

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

The chapter moves along at a nice even pace, until the end! Very nice ending to wake up the reader for the next Posting.

Very well done.

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Thanks so much, Ray. :)

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

Of course the first thing I think about is, will the baby be okay if Blaze is involved in an accident. See? You've got me concerned about all the characters! (Except Luke of course. He can go to hell!)

So Blaze and Luke are both headed in the same direction? That should make for an interesting chapter. I look forward to finding out what happens next.

Alexis x

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Thanks so much, Alexis. The baby is fine. :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

She must have seen Luke. But even if Luke sees Sebastian Bozo, he probbly won't know him. Then there's the camera. Every time it's disposed of, it finds a new owner. Who finds it this time?

 Comment Written 15-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Thanks so much, Cindy. I had her throw away the camera in case I want to write a second volume of SNAPSHOTS, the short story collection based on the camera. I may or may not do it, but this explains why the camera is on Earth without an agent. :)