** Happy Times **
A lil piece that makes me smile....11 total reviews
Comment from joeruptak
Hello neighbor
what a lovely poem, you said things that I am sure have been
on everyone's mind at one time or another.
The rhythm and flow are great, which makes it a very good read.
I will put a copy of this on the wall in my workspace to remind me this is the kind of work I should strive for.
good job and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Hello neighbor
what a lovely poem, you said things that I am sure have been
on everyone's mind at one time or another.
The rhythm and flow are great, which makes it a very good read.
I will put a copy of this on the wall in my workspace to remind me this is the kind of work I should strive for.
good job and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you so very much!! 😀
Comment from MissMerri
This is a lovely expression of what makes you happy. I can see that you are someone ready to see the good in any situation and even writing brings a smile to your face. This verse was my favorite:
"To see a woman with a baby in her womb
Picking roses to smell while in full bloom
Flying a kite barefoot in the warm sand
Soul mates chasing the rainbow hand in hand "
The imagery here is so strong and beautiful and the meter and rhyme Flow smoothly.
I loved this! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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This is a lovely expression of what makes you happy. I can see that you are someone ready to see the good in any situation and even writing brings a smile to your face. This verse was my favorite:
"To see a woman with a baby in her womb
Picking roses to smell while in full bloom
Flying a kite barefoot in the warm sand
Soul mates chasing the rainbow hand in hand "
The imagery here is so strong and beautiful and the meter and rhyme Flow smoothly.
I loved this! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful comment and generous rating! ! I appreciate it all very much....xoxo
Comment from TPAC
Cute. Poet fought through this work thoroughly throughout yet talent still glisten, revision, is all that can be said find the greater statement Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Cute. Poet fought through this work thoroughly throughout yet talent still glisten, revision, is all that can be said find the greater statement Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you so very much
Comment from RYME4U
Well done and well rhymed. I like the same tings that t6he author listed here. The message of happiness rings true throughout the poem. Great choice of artwork.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Well done and well rhymed. I like the same tings that t6he author listed here. The message of happiness rings true throughout the poem. Great choice of artwork.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you sooo much! ! I'm happy you enjoyed my writing....hhave a great day
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem makes me happy as well. At times the weary world pulls a dull shade over what should be the blessing of opportunity and reaching out. Nice.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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This poem makes me happy as well. At times the weary world pulls a dull shade over what should be the blessing of opportunity and reaching out. Nice.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Ohh thank you so very much. I truly appreciate this!!
Comment from Joycee
This piece is so sweet. You mention yourself, your children, a woman with child picking roses and flying a kite, and bring it all together with happiness. You cover the different stages of life and end with blessings , faith and peace. Well written and meaningful.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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This piece is so sweet. You mention yourself, your children, a woman with child picking roses and flying a kite, and bring it all together with happiness. You cover the different stages of life and end with blessings , faith and peace. Well written and meaningful.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from Curly Girly
I like your poem. You come across as a happy and bubbly person. It is good to give thanks unto the Lord. There is so much pain and suffering. We must be grateful for what we have been blessed with.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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I like your poem. You come across as a happy and bubbly person. It is good to give thanks unto the Lord. There is so much pain and suffering. We must be grateful for what we have been blessed with.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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You're so sweet....Thank you very much!!
Comment from Annette Gulliver
A feel good poem which fits the requirements for the contest. Your rhyming works well with an easy to read flow. Love the artwork, such beautiful pink roses.
Good luck with your entry in the contest.
Annette
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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A feel good poem which fits the requirements for the contest. Your rhyming works well with an easy to read flow. Love the artwork, such beautiful pink roses.
Good luck with your entry in the contest.
Annette
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you so much! !
Comment from pharp
Beautifully penned my friend, your poem has a smooth flow, excellent rhyming and rhythm; did not see any errors. Lovely message within; thanks for sharing an enjoyable read and best wishes in the contest. Pharp
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Beautifully penned my friend, your poem has a smooth flow, excellent rhyming and rhythm; did not see any errors. Lovely message within; thanks for sharing an enjoyable read and best wishes in the contest. Pharp
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and high rating of stars. You sure gave me a much needed smile tonight and i really appreciate that....xoxo
Comment from w.j.debi
Choosing to be happy makes it so. You seem to look on the bright side thus making your life and everyone around you happier. Nice end rhymes in your quatrains.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Choosing to be happy makes it so. You seem to look on the bright side thus making your life and everyone around you happier. Nice end rhymes in your quatrains.
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Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you so very much. I appreciate your kindness.....xoxo
