** Hot Romance **
An Acrostic on Romance6 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
Hot sex on a mountain top - don't know if I'd want to try that - lol. Great acrostic form. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Hot sex on a mountain top - don't know if I'd want to try that - lol. Great acrostic form. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you!! ;)
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Thank you!! ;)
Comment from Curly Girly
I enjoyed reading this poem about lovemaking. Your presentation is good, and I like the way that the words are easy to read down the left-hand side. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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I enjoyed reading this poem about lovemaking. Your presentation is good, and I like the way that the words are easy to read down the left-hand side. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you!! ;)
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Thank you!! ;)
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem about romance, Hot Romance, shows two folks getting what they came for. I think the rhyming went well and told the orgasmic tale to a happy ending.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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This acrostic poem about romance, Hot Romance, shows two folks getting what they came for. I think the rhyming went well and told the orgasmic tale to a happy ending.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you so very much
Comment from K. Lorraine
The acrostic part of the poem was obvious and easily seen...
This is always a good thing...
The subject ideas was intriguing...
I liked how you gently created a visual...
The picture was nice and added just the right amount sensuality to the piece...
Nice job and the best of the lot...
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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The acrostic part of the poem was obvious and easily seen...
This is always a good thing...
The subject ideas was intriguing...
I liked how you gently created a visual...
The picture was nice and added just the right amount sensuality to the piece...
Nice job and the best of the lot...
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you so very much my sweet friend!! I really appreciate your wonderful comment and high rating. You gave me a much needed boost today and smile too!! :) xoxo
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My fingers are crossed for you...
Comment from TPAC
Lovely set of poetry conveyed in a story form all ingredients nicely gathered and presented to form capturing the reader. Poet could enhance work by descriptive additives a good tug she will float Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Lovely set of poetry conveyed in a story form all ingredients nicely gathered and presented to form capturing the reader. Poet could enhance work by descriptive additives a good tug she will float Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you sooo very much for your amazing comment and high rating. That means so very much to me!! xoxo
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Poem depicts love making on a mountaintop, or at least a chance encounter, between two people. Were they strangers? Friends? Lovers? Or maybe something else?
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Poem depicts love making on a mountaintop, or at least a chance encounter, between two people. Were they strangers? Friends? Lovers? Or maybe something else?
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Again thank you!! I truly appreciate your thoughts on things I could expand with. xoxo
