Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Luke is such a boob - I love the exchange here with the police - neither one gets what the other one is saying - but it all works out.
Intrigued to find out what Lenny can do for him.
Nancy

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thanks for reading, Nancy. :)

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

A good chapter that moves along very well. The posting gets us wondering how he'll get to Blake. A good lead in to the next chapter.

Thanks!

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Ray, thank you for reading. :)

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

I couldn't but laugh at Luke. He's such a fool. This post had a lot of serious humor in it. You did a good job of writing it. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

Thanks a million for the Saturday sixer, Barbara. :)

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

Man, Lucifer is a dummy. Wouldn't it make sense to know the ins and outs of how NOT to bribe a City Hall Clerk? The clueless arrogance he displays in his interaction with the Police Officer is hilarious. I can't see him being successful on this adventure.

 Comment Written 15-May-2015

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reply by the author on 15-May-2015

Thanks, Muffins. Well, what else would you expect from Luke? :)

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

This is such a SCREAM! I swear I see this on a stage or in a movie. You could have various mega-stars doing cameos as Luke's host bodies. I'm not too far behind for a change. On to the next chapter. mikey

 Comment Written 15-May-2015

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reply by the author on 15-May-2015

LOL! Thanks a bunch, Mikey. Here are six stars for reviewing. ******

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

to accept him and would be strong and have guns. LOL. That's always my requirement in a man too.

Crunch, what a perfect name for the crusher in the picture.

Uh oh, Lucifer isn't too pleased when he's embarrassed by not knowing something he shoulda known. The little narcissist.

Ha, this detective seems to have a problem with names. That's hilarious. Blaise.

I like the tone of this chapter. It's a little different and I also look forward to what's behind the unmarked door.

Very nicely written, Phyllis.

Gloria

 Comment Written 15-May-2015

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reply by the author on 15-May-2015

Thanks, Gloria. I agree... great qualities in a man, just like my hubby. He hits the bullseye every time in practice, so I feel pretty safe. :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

A well written chapter. It always concerns me how after many, many centuries Luke is so simple minded. I know he is comic relief but as a character he is static. Is that his purpose?

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thanks so much. Yep, he never changes. That's the mark of an insane or brain-damaged person... or a really stupid angel. :)

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Alex/Luke is likely to draw more attention to himself. Will Blaise be able to recognize him as Luke if she sees him. Could be trouble.

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thanks, Alan. No, she won't know Alex is really Luke, not right away, at least. :)

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

It's really strange trying to imagine Luke needing to find information from a human. We are conditioned to believing he can enter a weak human brain and knows everything that's going on, so you really have to bin that idea to get your head around an uniformed 'normal' person.

Getting there, but slowly!

Alexis x

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thanks, Alexis. Luke just uses the body. Alex's mind is asleep while he's possessed, so neither is aware of the other. Only one mind at a time may be active, or the body would fall over from different commands.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Of course, I hope that I'm never close to Luke or directed to his domain, but you give me reason every day to think that I might just be able to take over the place. LOL. Thanks for another fun chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

LOL! I'm sure it would be better managed, and evil in the world would increase three-fold. :) Thanks for a fun review that made me smile.