Pollutants
The cause of the changes in the environment.42 total reviews
Comment from zanya
These sentiments capture very well the state of play, as it were on our planet earth and how we are conducting ourselves and our affairs - succinct and with a beautiful pic
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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These sentiments capture very well the state of play, as it were on our planet earth and how we are conducting ourselves and our affairs - succinct and with a beautiful pic
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from Kyam
Tells somewhat about pollutants. The picture is very strong and tells a lot to the imagination. It is very different I would say. Faith
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Tells somewhat about pollutants. The picture is very strong and tells a lot to the imagination. It is very different I would say. Faith
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from Ben Colder
Something to surly to think about. Perhaps double boil the water and then do it again. Good contest piece. Hope you win. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Something to surly to think about. Perhaps double boil the water and then do it again. Good contest piece. Hope you win. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment as well as hoping I will win. There are a lot of good writers on this site.
Comment from marylou4
That was dynamic, true, and outstanding in content and expression.
Your three lines, shine a light on this often misunderstood and overlooked condition in society.
The harm that is caused is not fully appreciated, YET.
Thank you for the sensitive way you treated this subject and the eloquent manner of your expression.
I found no technical flaws in your writing.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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That was dynamic, true, and outstanding in content and expression.
Your three lines, shine a light on this often misunderstood and overlooked condition in society.
The harm that is caused is not fully appreciated, YET.
Thank you for the sensitive way you treated this subject and the eloquent manner of your expression.
I found no technical flaws in your writing.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you for your five stars and comment.
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You are most welcome.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from dmt1967
It is sad to see dead life in a beautiful lake. The picture adds power to the poets words. I like the power and meaning behind the words. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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It is sad to see dead life in a beautiful lake. The picture adds power to the poets words. I like the power and meaning behind the words. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from Glasstruth
A simple statement, but oh how true. Some still deny climate change, and I wonder about those billionaires (in the oil industry) that promote everything's just fine, don't they have kids, grandchildren? Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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A simple statement, but oh how true. Some still deny climate change, and I wonder about those billionaires (in the oil industry) that promote everything's just fine, don't they have kids, grandchildren? Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
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Thanks for the five stars and comment, it is to bad there is a dark side of progress, without we wouldn't be this far.
If we don't control it, who knows what our health will be like.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements our poem very well. It is about air. Pollutants are indeed unhealthy. I think your might be a strong contender. Best wishes for the prompt.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Excellent photo that complements our poem very well. It is about air. Pollutants are indeed unhealthy. I think your might be a strong contender. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thanks for the five stars and comment. I didn't win but I enjoyed putting it together.
Comment from Delahay
That is certainly short and to the point. There are very few words here but they say quite a bit. You make a very good point here and it is impressive that you do succinctly.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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That is certainly short and to the point. There are very few words here but they say quite a bit. You make a very good point here and it is impressive that you do succinctly.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, pollutants, poses the duper negative picture of pollution that exists from the crisp, chilly shores of Maine to the warm and windy beaches of California.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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This 3-5-3, pollutants, poses the duper negative picture of pollution that exists from the crisp, chilly shores of Maine to the warm and windy beaches of California.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Pollutants
Indoors or outdoors
Unhealthy
This is an interesting take on the air prompt. You were able to include indoor and outdoor air being polluted.
Good job with the syllable count. Awesome picture.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Pollutants
Indoors or outdoors
Unhealthy
This is an interesting take on the air prompt. You were able to include indoor and outdoor air being polluted.
Good job with the syllable count. Awesome picture.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
