Comment from Donovan

Exceptional

This story gets better and better. Jim finally has Soni wrapped in a blanket...was hoping for a little more..but...its a start. And the animals are smarter than the humans. I think you are a very good writer.

 Comment Written 15-May-2015

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Comment from jim lawler

Excellent

A nice smooth flowing story. It quite interesting and you give it a touch suspense. The conversation comes across as believable and everyday. I didn't spot any typos and it needs no revision. Good luck and god bless. Jim

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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You're so very welcome and God bless you and yours! Jim

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

HI. This continues to be a good story:-) I do like Midnight, and dogs and am partial to that special bond...to me it is not strange, but oftne women and their animals have a sense...but tell me, why , why does the blanket need to slip? Oh ya, more excitement:-)
padumachitta

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Barb...

Nice bit suspense going here. Quick and clever thinking on Jim's part. Hope nothing happens to Soni on the way down.

Good chapter.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 12-May-2015

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Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Just being cautious, I think that I would tie the hands and feet of the bad guys and lower them to the ledge for safe keeping. Then use the blankets and couple tree branches to make a travois that can transport Sonia as far as needed for phone reception. Thanks for another fine chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 12-May-2015

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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Not enough ropes. I only had Soni bring one extra rope. I thought of that myself and wondered if Jim would help Soni first or secure the men.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Excellent reading. Although I haven't read every chapter I can still get the feel of the story and actually follow it. What is more I can see you write it well. Looking forward to read more. Ulla

 Comment Written 12-May-2015

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Comment from Marvin Calloway

Excellent

Your writing is amazing. I felt as if I were right there, witnessing every action. There's enough excitement to tide me over until the next chapter. The ending was almost a literal cliff hanger.
Marv

 Comment Written 11-May-2015

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Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

I hope nothing serious happened to Soni. It would be
difficult to place her in a horse and go for help.
This chapter held my interest. Now I'm waiting for
the next one to see that Soni can be helped as soon
as possible. Hugs

 Comment Written 11-May-2015

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Comment from CALLAHANMR

Exceptional

Hi Barbara:)
I hopr nothing spookr the horse as they pull Soni up from thr cliff where she lies injured. Jim's makeshift rescue appratus has starded to come apart as the rescue becomes treacherous. Hreat cliffhanger.

I hope all the bad storms passed you by. Love and Irish Hugs to help keep you ssfe,

Roger

 Comment Written 11-May-2015

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Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

I felt the tension in this scene as you used strong descriptive details to engage the reader. I was holding my breath as Soni was being raised up from where she had fallen. The ending with the blanket tilting left Jim praying and me holding my breath until next post. Hurry!! 8-)

 Comment Written 11-May-2015

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