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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from nancyjam
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I wondered when she would get around to Sebastian. Now Luke is
hunting for him as well.
Look forward to next chapters to see how this all plays out.
Nancy

 Comment Written 13-May-2015


reply by the author on 14-May-2015
    Thanks so much, Nancy. You know Luke has to run into Blaze at some point, and she won't recognize him. :)
Comment from michaelcahill
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What an awesome segue! I can see it in the movie.
A beautiful bridge and set-up for the next round of hilarious happenings. Luke's so much fun. I sometimes look at people in Walmart wondering if he's entered them! Can't wait for more.
I actually read this and reviewed it at the same time. I forgot about the penguins though... mikey

 Comment Written 13-May-2015


reply by the author on 13-May-2015
    LOL! Don't get me started on Walmart shoppers. Thanks yet again, my friend. :)
Comment from Muffins
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Perfect display of the power of the sub-conscience. Luckily for Blaze, it's spoken to her in a form of an angel. As a former one herself, she won't dismiss the message but take it as a serious sign to fix a wrong.

 Comment Written 12-May-2015


reply by the author on 13-May-2015
    Thank you so much, Muffins. :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
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Your writing is always on top, Phyllis. A real joy to read as it never has errors to correct. Your skills are to be envied. Well written. Drew xx

 Comment Written 12-May-2015


reply by the author on 12-May-2015
    Thanks a million for the sixer, Drew, and for your comments. I say the very same thing about YOUR writing! :)
Comment from Green Lake Girl
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I feel like a dim bulb, Phyllis. But can you refresh my memory as to who Sebastian is? So, Blaze has to confront yet another issue-poor thing. It seems she never gets any rest! And now she'll be tangled up with Luke again. Sigh . . . at least there'll be more Luke scenes for me! Lots of drama coming up.

 Comment Written 12-May-2015


reply by the author on 12-May-2015
    Thanks so much. Sebastian Blake is the senator Blaze used the magic camera on, changing him from a tall, handsome man into a short, chubby, balding, clownish man. He was soon committed to the county mental hospital for his "crazy" acts and claims, which is where he is now. Luke gave him money to change his vote but he never did it and is thought to have run away. Only Blaze knows where he is.
reply by Green Lake Girl on 12-May-2015
    Ah, yes! Thanks for refreshing my memory.
Comment from Spitfire
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Three guesses who Theo's new accountant will be. Clever transition to put Luke back into the scene. Will Blaze catch on to his new identity. Hope you have a handsome hunk in the next posted picture.

 Comment Written 11-May-2015


reply by the author on 12-May-2015
    Thanks, Shari. Luke won't be an accountant. That was mentioned just so Blaze could stop working. His goal is to find where the ex-senator is locked up. Blaze told him that, and he is not even sure he can believe her, but he plans to search just the same.
Comment from seaglass
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This will take some clever story weaving...what will she turn him into...how...will he be trouble for her when he is freed? So much to cover.

 Comment Written 11-May-2015


reply by the author on 12-May-2015
    Thanks, Carolyn. Luke and Blaze will both be featured, going back and forth between the two until they show up together at the same place.
Comment from Curly Girly
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This is another well written chapter. Blaze suddenly realises that the devil will want to have revenge on Sebastian for taking her away. She is also to be a stay-at-home mum, which is best for the baby. It must be nice to have not financial worries. I can't imagine a life like that.

 Comment Written 11-May-2015


reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Thanks, Nicole. Luke wants Sebastian beccause he paid him a lot of money to change his vote on a bill, and the senator supposedly ran off after losing his Senate seat to a challenger. Only Blaze knows where Sebastian really is.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Sure, lying is allowed, Hell, everybody lies these days. It's almost like putting on your shoes and tying them. Everybody just does it with their own twist, so to speak. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 11-May-2015


reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Sad, but true, Ric. Thanks for reading. Always appreciate your comments, and that's no lie. :)
Comment from boxergirl
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Sebastian is surely in trouble if Luke is after him. Not sure if Blaze can get there in time to help him out. She will definitely have to tell Theo a little lie.

 Comment Written 11-May-2015


reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Thank you so much. The last thing Blaze wants is for Theo to know she has a connection (intimate, at that) to the former senator. Good thing she's no longer working so she has time to do whatever she's going to do while Theo is busy at work.