Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Celebrate Your Leaving"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
46 total reviews
Comment from alexisleech
A beautifully rhymed account of how drinking can take away the pain! Not to be advised, it is often the only way someone can cope when they have loved, lost, or are plain disillusioned by a huge disappointment.
Why not? As long as it doesn't last for long and ruin someone's life!
Well done, and good luck in the competition.
Alexis x
Some times (sometimes) losing someone
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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A beautifully rhymed account of how drinking can take away the pain! Not to be advised, it is often the only way someone can cope when they have loved, lost, or are plain disillusioned by a huge disappointment.
Why not? As long as it doesn't last for long and ruin someone's life!
Well done, and good luck in the competition.
Alexis x
Some times (sometimes) losing someone
Comment Written 11-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your poem, even though it was sad. Some times heartaches never leaves your heart soul and mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I love the words to your poem, even though it was sad. Some times heartaches never leaves your heart soul and mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 11-May-2015
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Thank you miss cookie.
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You are very welcome,Until next time.
cookie
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is celebrating with a difference. About someone who is, in fact, not at all happy but trying to get over the loss of love by celebrating with booze. The writer starts by saying he's managing on his own and hardly knows his love has gone, but it is only when he has had enough to drink that he feels that way. Well written. The words are good, and even though the meter which is uneven it does not detract from the beauty of the sentiment. A song like quality. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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This is celebrating with a difference. About someone who is, in fact, not at all happy but trying to get over the loss of love by celebrating with booze. The writer starts by saying he's managing on his own and hardly knows his love has gone, but it is only when he has had enough to drink that he feels that way. Well written. The words are good, and even though the meter which is uneven it does not detract from the beauty of the sentiment. A song like quality. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from judester
Love your style, I can always hear the music 'a la Steve Earle' when I read your entries, bravo j all my ex's live in Texas, that's why I hang my hat in Tennesse.
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Love your style, I can always hear the music 'a la Steve Earle' when I read your entries, bravo j all my ex's live in Texas, that's why I hang my hat in Tennesse.
Comment Written 11-May-2015
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Thanks.
Comment from Chris Tee
This song really puts perspective into the story and it is usually the route most goes after the break-up. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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This song really puts perspective into the story and it is usually the route most goes after the break-up. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from CR Delport
Ice cold beer on a cold rainy day? I would rather go for a cup of steamy hot chocolate :) This is well done and a little sad.
Take care.
Christelle.
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Ice cold beer on a cold rainy day? I would rather go for a cup of steamy hot chocolate :) This is well done and a little sad.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 11-May-2015
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Beer is used in celebrations much more than chocolate. Thanks for your comments.
Comment from c_lucas
As Roy Clarke so aptly put it, "Thank God and Greyhound, you're gone." Your entry is very well written with a very good chance of winning the honors. Good luck in your contest.
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As Roy Clarke so aptly put it, "Thank God and Greyhound, you're gone." Your entry is very well written with a very good chance of winning the honors. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
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You're welcome.
Comment from mfowler
Now that's a sour view of celebrating, but an original one indeed. She left and somehow you call it celebrating because you should have stopped her. The celebrations that of a drunk drowning sorrows rather than raising a glass in happiness. The bar scene is a great scenario for express the soulful agony that this song portrays. An imagery of great hurt. This works as a song from best I can tell. Best of luck with the voters.
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Now that's a sour view of celebrating, but an original one indeed. She left and somehow you call it celebrating because you should have stopped her. The celebrations that of a drunk drowning sorrows rather than raising a glass in happiness. The bar scene is a great scenario for express the soulful agony that this song portrays. An imagery of great hurt. This works as a song from best I can tell. Best of luck with the voters.
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from inside echo
Your poem is sad. It may say the words of being glad she is gone, but the emotions you express, as well as your behaviors say you love and miss her terribly. It is written like a true country song. You have great rhyme and flow. I like it. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
echo
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Your poem is sad. It may say the words of being glad she is gone, but the emotions you express, as well as your behaviors say you love and miss her terribly. It is written like a true country song. You have great rhyme and flow. I like it. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
echo
Comment Written 10-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from BJ_Barnes
This is such an excellently written poem. I love how you tied this poem about love lost in with the let's celebrate theme. Thanks for sharing it.
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This is such an excellently written poem. I love how you tied this poem about love lost in with the let's celebrate theme. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-May-2015
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Appreciate your comments.
