Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Exceptional

You deserve a great big 6 for this that's for sure Lady M..You get better every time you write..Sorry did not comment sooner but I was out of town for a few days visiting the other side of the Island..
TK

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thank you,sir Knight for such a sweet review!

M

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

A "catchy" little poem, Melissa -
it's terrible when the one you
trust lets you down and your
words make that clear.

good luck with the contest, my friend.

Margaret

 Comment Written 11-May-2015

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reply by the author on 11-May-2015

Thank you, Margaret. To have a writer of your caliber say my work was good is a reward in itself :)

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

It's a real eye opener when we learn we can't trust the one we have counted on. So sorry that you had to experience that. But, hopefully the next time you lay your soul bare, you will have a better result.

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks JM for feeling my pain. Thank you also for this wonderful review
Always

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Although wonderful you seem cross Not really willing to blast the person you lost trust

for example

I trusted you.
You were such a clown.
I had no clue,
You let me down.

Feel the burn Thanking you for sharing

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thank you..I guess I was holding back! I shall remember this.

Always

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is well written and the unrequited love theme is expressed in a descriptive manner. Good choice of illustration. Rhyming is smoothly done

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thank you RYME4U for this delightful review.
Always :)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Short, sweet & simple, but that doesn't mean it's not impactful. Sometimes less is more, and your poem is a perfect example of just one of those cases.

Melancholy, with a bit a bitter irony sprinkled in for good measure.

I really enjoyed this one. Best of luck in the contest... ~Dean

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thank you, sir! Your praise is well received!
Always :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 07-May-2015

Anytime...

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem tells a sad story. The repeated line is good in all 3 verses. The picture is perfect. Good job with the rhyme.

Suggestion: the font size is very small--maybe make it a bit larger.

Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thank you very much for this nice review. I will take care of that font size :)
Always,