Comment from royowen

Excellent

Good old cadence drives a car that won't do more than 55 mph, to aid global warming, C-Daddy calls her a " tree hugger" Love it! They try to lose a blue car with "nasties" in it, C-daddy has no license but managed to cause the crashing of the blue car! He tells Cadence these people are "serpents". Great story Rhonda, C-daddy is starting to reveal he is more mysterious than first thought, good yarn, most enjoyable, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Thank you, Roy, You give such nice and thorough reviews. That is so encouraging and helpful. Yes, the mystery that is C-Daddy is growing in his character, and he loves to give Cadence grief about the car, which is based on my daughter's car. I suspect she's a tree hugger, too. Thanks again
Rhonda

reply by royowen on 07-May-2015

My pleasure, as always, Rhonda

reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Really, it is helpful when people give detailed reviews, and I'm sure you know that. I need to work on my reviewing skills!

reply by royowen on 07-May-2015

I remember a wine taster once saying to me "you don't need to know what side of the hill, the blend or the soil the grapes are grown in, to know the taste is great". So just say what you like and what you don't like, and that's it, you are always positive in your comments, you are kind and just, that's all you need, my blessings, Rhonda, Roy.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Notes interesting. Baltimore sure has been under attack recently. Action flows smoothly. Story line easy to follow. Write on.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Yes, Baltimore has had its share of worries. My daughter lives close-by and says it's more licized than media would have it seem, but it is still in the heart of the setting for this story.

Thanks,
Rhonda

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day again mate. I love where you are steering this yarn. He sounds like one tough ombre to me this guy, even the name says so. This one is perfectyly written with no spags that I can see and very entertaining, you are doing very well and I am proud of you. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Thanks so much, Fez. I appreciate, always, your picking out spags because I can't see them all alone. Yes, C-Daddy is one tough dude, and more to come on that part. Again, thanks
Rhonda

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Lots of action in this chapter with the car chase. It seems trying to get answers from C-Daddy, only brings up more questions.
"Paranoia is when you think you are going to be chased by a random blue car, wisdom is when you know it, and skill is when you get away from it." - I like this

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 05-May-2015

Thank you so much for the review and comments. I also appreciate you keeping up with the story. It helps me to catch alignment mistakes if someone else reads. You're great, thanks,
Rhonda

reply by MelB on 05-May-2015

You're welcome Rhonda:) I have so many questions, but I'm sure they will be answered in future chapters.

reply by the author on 05-May-2015

That is so sweet. Some answers come right away and others work themselves out eventually. Thanks again,
Rhonda

reply by MelB on 06-May-2015

You're welcome