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Comment from robina1978
The photo is a white dove, a symbol of peace, complements your poem very well. It is a marvellous free verse about several things, amongst other love. Thanks for sharing. Overflowing with alliteration.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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The photo is a white dove, a symbol of peace, complements your poem very well. It is a marvellous free verse about several things, amongst other love. Thanks for sharing. Overflowing with alliteration.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thanks sis....,ove mkichael
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Michael. You know I read this three times and I'm still not sure what it is about. I like the almost incoherent stanzas of words you use. I catch a sort of clue with the Purple Rain cover but, I'm losing the battle here my friend. :) hope you are well. xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi Michael. You know I read this three times and I'm still not sure what it is about. I like the almost incoherent stanzas of words you use. I catch a sort of clue with the Purple Rain cover but, I'm losing the battle here my friend. :) hope you are well. xoxo deborah
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...smile-
Comment from LIJ Red
I'll have to excuse myself from commenting on content. The rapidfire mixed images did not deliver a specific message. The free verse is not out of logical reach and the spelling and grammar acceptable. Five stars.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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I'll have to excuse myself from commenting on content. The rapidfire mixed images did not deliver a specific message. The free verse is not out of logical reach and the spelling and grammar acceptable. Five stars.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you....smile-
Comment from misscookie
You capture my attention from the start.
I don't know the song that young mans playing
But from the expression on his face.
He's playing it from the depth of his soul.
Cookie
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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You capture my attention from the start.
I don't know the song that young mans playing
But from the expression on his face.
He's playing it from the depth of his soul.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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hi...-smile- thank you maam...love michael
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You're very welcome, Prayers, hugs back to you. have a blessed day.
Cookie
Comment from Eric1
Hi Micheal, I really loved your wonderfully written poem which leaves quite an impression on the reader.
Starting with a light pitter patter it takes you through a crescendo of a rainstorm then back to pitter patter, great use of description , imagery and alliteration.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi Micheal, I really loved your wonderfully written poem which leaves quite an impression on the reader.
Starting with a light pitter patter it takes you through a crescendo of a rainstorm then back to pitter patter, great use of description , imagery and alliteration.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...-smile-
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. I enjoyed this poem. The imagery kept me 'seeing' and feeling.
I am a little rusty at reviewing so can't say I am good looking for SPAG, sorry.
thanks,
padumachitta
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi. I enjoyed this poem. The imagery kept me 'seeing' and feeling.
I am a little rusty at reviewing so can't say I am good looking for SPAG, sorry.
thanks,
padumachitta
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you....smile-
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Open House", is an extremely well--written and heart-moving piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this poet's work.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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"Open House", is an extremely well--written and heart-moving piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this poet's work.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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well thank you pretty Lady....love michael
Michael, you're very welcome.
love the Duchess
Comment from BJ_Barnes
Beautiful poem! It flows together so well and has its own unique rhythm. I will definitely recommend it to others. Thank you so much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Beautiful poem! It flows together so well and has its own unique rhythm. I will definitely recommend it to others. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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I thank you BJ...-smile- have a great night.
Comment from bizzygirl
As if a thunderstorm brewing softely the building in crescendo until booming loud then retreating softly to pitter pat. A very strong emotionally charge verse. It flows as a thunderstorm as well. Interesting conceptual writing
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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As if a thunderstorm brewing softely the building in crescendo until booming loud then retreating softly to pitter pat. A very strong emotionally charge verse. It flows as a thunderstorm as well. Interesting conceptual writing
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Hi...-smile- thank you very much....love-
Comment from Glasstruth
Love the first verse. It's meter, alliteration just rolled off my tongue. I can see why you'd want to repeat it. Didn't know there was a cover of 'Purple Rain.' Influences are everywhere. We're all connected. The second to last verse was very up lifting and inspiring. Well crafted! Les
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Love the first verse. It's meter, alliteration just rolled off my tongue. I can see why you'd want to repeat it. Didn't know there was a cover of 'Purple Rain.' Influences are everywhere. We're all connected. The second to last verse was very up lifting and inspiring. Well crafted! Les
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Hey Les....-smile- thank you sir. always appreciated...love-
