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Comment from Bill Schott
Once you go through the soundtrack the imaging becomes clearer and the extension of the Purple Rain sentiment presented in 'puddles' takes on meaning and magisty.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
Once you go through the soundtrack the imaging becomes clearer and the extension of the Purple Rain sentiment presented in 'puddles' takes on meaning and magisty.
Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you ...smile-
Comment from Sis Cat
Kinetic use of language. Alliteration of p- adds rhythm and unifies poem. Strong visuals and emotional core resonated with me. Referenced Prince's "Purple Rain" song. Poem shows craftsmanship and nuance. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
Kinetic use of language. Alliteration of p- adds rhythm and unifies poem. Strong visuals and emotional core resonated with me. Referenced Prince's "Purple Rain" song. Poem shows craftsmanship and nuance. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...smile-
Comment from c_lucas
The problems we face each day in our lives are smothered in turmoil. Your poem is very well written and others can relate to the daily turmoil. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
The problems we face each day in our lives are smothered in turmoil. Your poem is very well written and others can relate to the daily turmoil. Good job.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi Charlie...thanks bro....love Bug-
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You're welcome, Michael. Charlie
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, yours mixed with mine....life...full moon bloomed beautiful...that pretty much says it for me...I love your poem...words so unique to you...and this is truly one of my favorite songs...and I so love the picture...I would go through all the words to say how much I love you...but you know I already do...a wonderful poem...love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
HI Michael, yours mixed with mine....life...full moon bloomed beautiful...that pretty much says it for me...I love your poem...words so unique to you...and this is truly one of my favorite songs...and I so love the picture...I would go through all the words to say how much I love you...but you know I already do...a wonderful poem...love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi...-smile-....really...well thank you linda....you've been a wonderful friend and business partner. I appreciate all you are...love you michael
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well I'm glad we are such good friends and business partner...and I appreciate all you are too...I love you and so glad we are together...means the world to me...love you too Linda
Comment from Dawn Munro
I love the comparisons, Michael - are not all relationships we have as we tread this adventure we call life diverse - 'mud puddle splashed' some, some 'full moon bloomed beautiful'? Wonderful free verse, full of imagery and very thought-provoking.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
I love the comparisons, Michael - are not all relationships we have as we tread this adventure we call life diverse - 'mud puddle splashed' some, some 'full moon bloomed beautiful'? Wonderful free verse, full of imagery and very thought-provoking.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...-smile-
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You're welcome - my pleasure.
Comment from ravim
I think this is an exceptionally clever poem that either looks totally crazy or totally ingenious! As you muse on the subject of love, you relate its various realms to the pitter patter of raindrops. You see them in various shapes and hues and try to work out an imaginary picture of your own. So very confusing, but so very special to read.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
I think this is an exceptionally clever poem that either looks totally crazy or totally ingenious! As you muse on the subject of love, you relate its various realms to the pitter patter of raindrops. You see them in various shapes and hues and try to work out an imaginary picture of your own. So very confusing, but so very special to read.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you ...-smile-
Comment from Praise000
Hie Reconciled,
Well written.
The picture that you have chosen is
well connected to :" soaked in innocence peace
pure white with motives song
does love soar on wings of doves..."
All the best.Praise000
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
Hie Reconciled,
Well written.
The picture that you have chosen is
well connected to :" soaked in innocence peace
pure white with motives song
does love soar on wings of doves..."
All the best.Praise000
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...-smile-
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely great job overall and in the poem the alliteration just exceptional, Well done with this great and sophisticated piece of poetry,
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
This is an absolutely great job overall and in the poem the alliteration just exceptional, Well done with this great and sophisticated piece of poetry,
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you....smile-
Comment from CR Delport
It takes such a mixture of people and emotions to make up what we call life. Unfortunately not always in harmony. This is well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
It takes such a mixture of people and emotions to make up what we call life. Unfortunately not always in harmony. This is well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you ....smile-
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading your writing.
Pitter patter . . .
precision hallmarks unique pattern
mud puddle splashed special
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading your writing.
Pitter patter . . .
precision hallmarks unique pattern
mud puddle splashed special
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you....smile-
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thank you!