Spoken Word
Share your poem by any means necessary.96 total reviews
Comment from Megalips
Remarkable poem and remarkable topic...one of those rare poems that opens windows and doors to our traditionally closed perspectives so that we can realize how very fortunate we are. And like you, I've heard some incredibly disabled people speak with inspiration that actually seemed to resonate power from their disability.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Remarkable poem and remarkable topic...one of those rare poems that opens windows and doors to our traditionally closed perspectives so that we can realize how very fortunate we are. And like you, I've heard some incredibly disabled people speak with inspiration that actually seemed to resonate power from their disability.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Yes, Megalips, many of them have a power that resonates from their disability. I am glad my poem opens windows and doors about what a poet can do. Thanks for your six star review.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Kat. what a wonderfully written and thought out poem:
"But I have yet to hear you
who cowers in the audience at open mics
who fears the voice whispered through quivered lips
unable to amplify the voice shouted within "
Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Hi, Kat. what a wonderfully written and thought out poem:
"But I have yet to hear you
who cowers in the audience at open mics
who fears the voice whispered through quivered lips
unable to amplify the voice shouted within "
Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Bob, thanks for your review and, once again, for your recommendation that I only post work with a dollar plus payout. Since then, every single post has been a blockbuster. Thanks again.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant tribute and a fine piece of poetic art dear sis cat! poets come in different shapes and sizes, all which grow strength in overcoming obstacles for the "hobby" that they love so dearly. nice one!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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this is a brilliant tribute and a fine piece of poetic art dear sis cat! poets come in different shapes and sizes, all which grow strength in overcoming obstacles for the "hobby" that they love so dearly. nice one!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you, rebekka, for your kind review. I am glad enjoyed my tribute.
Comment from catch22
This is a great affirmation in free verse. I felt empowered after reading it and think it sounds great read aloud as well. A good piece of spoken word poetry with an important message about raising one's voice, no matter how scared and what the cost. I wish you much luck with the magazine submission.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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This is a great affirmation in free verse. I felt empowered after reading it and think it sounds great read aloud as well. A good piece of spoken word poetry with an important message about raising one's voice, no matter how scared and what the cost. I wish you much luck with the magazine submission.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Yes, gail126797, these poets and this poem empowered me to share it with you and to submit it to a magazine. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Maritza M. Mejia
Great idea to combine couples with an introduction and conclusion in 4 lines structure.
The use of senses to draw a picture of a poet is well defined. The last four lines dedicated to the audience is a wonderful addition to a good piece of art.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Great idea to combine couples with an introduction and conclusion in 4 lines structure.
The use of senses to draw a picture of a poet is well defined. The last four lines dedicated to the audience is a wonderful addition to a good piece of art.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you, Maritza, I enjoyed writing, performing, and sharing this poem for all. Thanks for your review.
Comment from abbasjoy
What a great way to describe all different kinds of poets. Even without the Author's notes I was able to see these people in my mind's eye from your very clear description.
What is fascinating is that even people with disabilities are able to have a voice and use it in public, whereas people, including myself, with a voice and even something worthwhile to say, are petrified. What gives?
Thanks for sharing, it gives me hope.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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What a great way to describe all different kinds of poets. Even without the Author's notes I was able to see these people in my mind's eye from your very clear description.
What is fascinating is that even people with disabilities are able to have a voice and use it in public, whereas people, including myself, with a voice and even something worthwhile to say, are petrified. What gives?
Thanks for sharing, it gives me hope.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Yes, abbasjoy, I do not know what gives. I think we sometimes take our skills, abilities, and opportunities for granted. These poets with disabilities show us the importance of being seen and heard. Thank you for your glowing, six star review.
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You are so right, about our taking our gifts and talents for granted.
It was my pleasure to give you 6 stars.
Comment from amahra
What a brave person you are to this. I will try and get that performance as soon as I've finished my reading for the day. Very beautiful writing dedicated to these brave poets.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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What a brave person you are to this. I will try and get that performance as soon as I've finished my reading for the day. Very beautiful writing dedicated to these brave poets.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you, amahra, for your fine review that pays tribute to these great poets. I hope you perform, too.
Comment from Herkjv1611
This is a unique piece for poets with disabilities.Accuracy on writing poems is not the thing.It presents the sweet smelling savor of work of a heart, mind and soul.Write more.Thanks.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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This is a unique piece for poets with disabilities.Accuracy on writing poems is not the thing.It presents the sweet smelling savor of work of a heart, mind and soul.Write more.Thanks.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Yes, accuracy on the page is not the thing. Accuracy in your heart is. Thank you for your six star review of my poem that paid tribute to these poets.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What an astounding subject matter for this highly creative poem. From time to time I think most poets write about poets, but this - this is brilliant. Highly evocative and excellent inspiration.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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What an astounding subject matter for this highly creative poem. From time to time I think most poets write about poets, but this - this is brilliant. Highly evocative and excellent inspiration.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you, Dawn, for your glowing review. I am glad you found my poem brilliant and inspiring.
Comment from ravenblack
You know, I might just be tempted to read this one at the open Mic I run- with credit going to you, of course. Just recently, we had someone with panic disorder read as a way of conquering his fear- and he was great. The only handicap to reading at the Mic is fear. Excellent poem that demands to be read aloud.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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You know, I might just be tempted to read this one at the open Mic I run- with credit going to you, of course. Just recently, we had someone with panic disorder read as a way of conquering his fear- and he was great. The only handicap to reading at the Mic is fear. Excellent poem that demands to be read aloud.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Ravenblack, go ahead and read it at the open mic you run. My name is Andre Le Mont Wilson of Oakland, California. You can watch my video link to see how I performed it. The two greatest enemies of poets are fear and silence. Thank you for your six star review and I hope my poem encourages others to share theirs.
