GOD IS EVERYWHERE
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Colors of God's Rainbow"God created all
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Comment from judiverse
Yes, I wondered what you meant by ROYGBIV. You have a great presentation with your use of the different colors to represent those of the rainbow. The rainbow represents visions of heaven through His love. You do a great job of presenting this so that the thought is made clear in one sentence. Interesting work. judi
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Yes, I wondered what you meant by ROYGBIV. You have a great presentation with your use of the different colors to represent those of the rainbow. The rainbow represents visions of heaven through His love. You do a great job of presenting this so that the thought is made clear in one sentence. Interesting work. judi
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you so much. Next time you see a rainbow, think ROY G Biv. Then you will know what the colors are in order from the outside to inside.
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You're welcome. I'd never see that sign for the rainbow before. judi
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written and presented acrostic for the colors of the rainbow. May your week be blessed with rainbows of His love, Patricia
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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This is a beautifully written and presented acrostic for the colors of the rainbow. May your week be blessed with rainbows of His love, Patricia
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Jannypan,
I think you should have given this a shot anyway. It gets high marks in my book for your insightful originality; especially with your addition of each color of the rainbow and the inspirational message.
Sometimes the committee likes those who think "outside the box"...so you never know.
Still, a beautiful thought with and excellent delivery...well done.
Have a wonderful Sunday, Bill
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Hello Jannypan,
I think you should have given this a shot anyway. It gets high marks in my book for your insightful originality; especially with your addition of each color of the rainbow and the inspirational message.
Sometimes the committee likes those who think "outside the box"...so you never know.
Still, a beautiful thought with and excellent delivery...well done.
Have a wonderful Sunday, Bill
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your support. I probably should have entered it, but I am glad I shared it with anyone who wants to read it.
Comment from Just2Write
Very nice, Janny. Good use of colour to enhance the meaning and visual of the poem. A good message in your poem as well.
Rose.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Very nice, Janny. Good use of colour to enhance the meaning and visual of the poem. A good message in your poem as well.
Rose.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I so appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem. Thank you for the kind comments too.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love this poem of faith in God, very spiritual.
poem
-good rhythm
-action flows smoothly
-descriptive language used
-excellent format and picture
-excellent character development
-held the reader's interest
write on!
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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I love this poem of faith in God, very spiritual.
poem
-good rhythm
-action flows smoothly
-descriptive language used
-excellent format and picture
-excellent character development
-held the reader's interest
write on!
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you. I appreciate your time. I am happy that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Pretty rainbow and a promise. Short, sweet, and a message this directly to the point. "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary". Write on.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Pretty rainbow and a promise. Short, sweet, and a message this directly to the point. "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary". Write on.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you so much. And, congrats on your "foodie" win.
Comment from mfowler
Great stuff. I really like your use of ROYGBIV as the acrostic base. The wording flows beautifully and you use enjambment to perfection creating it. A lovely spiritual work enhanced by the use of colour and the reflection on visions of heaven, a suitable comparison with the rainbow. Good work. Best of luck in the vote.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Great stuff. I really like your use of ROYGBIV as the acrostic base. The wording flows beautifully and you use enjambment to perfection creating it. A lovely spiritual work enhanced by the use of colour and the reflection on visions of heaven, a suitable comparison with the rainbow. Good work. Best of luck in the vote.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I did not enter this since it was not a real name. I did not want to be disqualified. However, I did want to share it.
Comment from BJ_Barnes
What a beautiful, spiritual poem. I love the positive message and the wonderful imagery. The use of roygbiv also brought back wonderful memories of elementary school when learning the colors of the rainbow.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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What a beautiful, spiritual poem. I love the positive message and the wonderful imagery. The use of roygbiv also brought back wonderful memories of elementary school when learning the colors of the rainbow.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you for your review and kind comments. I appreciate your time.
Comment from meggie13
When I was in grammar school I made up this exact word to memorize the colors of the Rainbow 'roygbiv'.The rainbow reminds us of the promise God made to never end the world in a diluge. Well wrtten with a very good presentation of your poem.
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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When I was in grammar school I made up this exact word to memorize the colors of the Rainbow 'roygbiv'.The rainbow reminds us of the promise God made to never end the world in a diluge. Well wrtten with a very good presentation of your poem.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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Thank you so much. You are so right about God's promise. Thank you for your kind comments, too.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from BlueMarble
I like your rainbow. It is so original and carries a wonderful message. I love the picture you used too. The rays of light seem to shine down on the poem.
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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I like your rainbow. It is so original and carries a wonderful message. I love the picture you used too. The rays of light seem to shine down on the poem.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem. You are very observant about the picture. I am so glad you liked everything.
