Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

What a state Lucifer's in - so satisfying to hear that.
He becomes more and more like a comic figure - pity
he didn't melt away completely - great entertainment,
Phyllis.

Margaret

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 05-May-2015

Great to see you, Margaret. Thanks for reading. :)

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Well Luke got what he deserves.
Hilarious scene of him trying to walk
and his feet melting together so he has
to hop.
You have quite an imagination, Phyllis.
Nancy

 Comment Written 04-May-2015

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reply by the author on 04-May-2015

Thanks so much, Nancy. :)

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Oh, Lucifer, not the brightest bulb, and not what you might expect out of someone they call a supreme being. A few bricks short of a load with no special skills that are evident. Thanks for another fun read. :-)

 Comment Written 04-May-2015

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reply by the author on 04-May-2015

Thanks for reading, Ric. I don't think there's any such thing as a "brilliant" criminal mind. You have to be stupid to break laws in the first place, whether they're local or God's laws. :)

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

This is a great breather chapter. The reader can digest the high drama standoff and emotional anxiety from the previous chapter and focus on something that's silly. Seeing Lucifer as Blaze sees him is refreshing and makes you cheer for Blaze and Tara more.

 Comment Written 04-May-2015

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reply by the author on 04-May-2015

Thank you so much, Muffins. Luke comes in handy for comic relief. I'm going to miss him. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha. Well, I must admit I can totally relate to not being defeated by my own demons and a fuckin' priest. LOL. Phyllis you crack me up.

Whoa, right into the lava pit. Perhaps I shall have to rethink my stance on this issue.

Yowza he was slightly damaged in the process.

Haaa, now he's a mermaid. You are amazing Phyllis and this chapter is freaking hilarious. Ow fuckit! LMAO.

Nice job, woman.

Gloria

 Comment Written 04-May-2015

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reply by the author on 04-May-2015

Thanks a bunch, Gloria. Thought a sicko like you would enjoy that. :)

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Exceptional

Wow! I actually cringed a couple of times while reading this chapter, Phyllis. I'd call this a major setback for Luke. Good ol' bumbling Luke with his crumbly black crust, walking with his knees together and "tenderness" eyeballs! This chapter is sheer entertainment and I'll tell you, it was a wonderful "Luke fix".

 Comment Written 03-May-2015

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reply by the author on 03-May-2015

Thank you so much, Marietta. I thought you might enjoy this one. Really appreciate the sixer too. :)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Exceptional

OMG! I absolutely loved this action packed chapter. How can you possibly call it silly? It was so creative and riveting. Such marvelous details about Luke getting caught in the lava, trying to escape, having it crust on his body. Just amazing, Phyllis! Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 03-May-2015

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reply by the author on 03-May-2015

Thank you verrry much for the sixer, Lou. I'm so glad you enjoyed it...sure was fun to write. I'm gonna miss Luke. :)

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Well hippity hop may be the latest dance craze. I think the devil is getting his due, but will he catch up with the committee before they get back to middle earth?

 Comment Written 02-May-2015

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reply by the author on 02-May-2015

Thanks so much for an amusing review. I had to laugh at the image of "middle earth" kids doing the hippity hop at their prom! :)

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

What a hoot this would be cartoon animators or special effects people. A challenge for the stunt man too if it were a movie. Your ability to describe step-by-step is top notch and something I find difficult to do. A six, if I had any left. This is a fun read.

 Comment Written 02-May-2015

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reply by the author on 02-May-2015

Thanks so much, Shari. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it... in fact, anything with Luke is fun. I think I will do short stories about him when the book is done.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

That's hilarious. Much better than having Blaze throw him in the pit. I love the parts where his suit melted. I'm sure his misadventure gave Blaze and her friends plenty of time to get away.

 Comment Written 02-May-2015

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reply by the author on 02-May-2015

Thank you so much, Cindy. Glad you enjoyed it. :)