Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Seven Little letters"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
29 total reviews
Comment from skye
So, what are the letters? No more has only six.
I loved this, loved the descriptive lines, the images, the realization of the heartbreak he caused, even though he continued with his actions.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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So, what are the letters? No more has only six.
I loved this, loved the descriptive lines, the images, the realization of the heartbreak he caused, even though he continued with his actions.
Excellent.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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g-o-o-d-b-y-e. Seven little letters how she told me "goodbye". Thanks for your comments and support.
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Wow. That is so great. Thank you. Duh.... for me.
Comment from Edward J
I thought this was well written. You did a great job of including the required line in the poem. The poem tells a sad story that really hits home with the final stanza. Wonderful word choices. A strong poem.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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I thought this was well written. You did a great job of including the required line in the poem. The poem tells a sad story that really hits home with the final stanza. Wonderful word choices. A strong poem.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support.
Comment from bizzygirl
Love this, flows so smoothly even if a heartbreaking tale of loss. The concept of 7 little letters, how small and how powerful. I have always felt words are power and emit energy. Well written. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Love this, flows so smoothly even if a heartbreaking tale of loss. The concept of 7 little letters, how small and how powerful. I have always felt words are power and emit energy. Well written. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you for your continued comments and support. Considering if I should maybe try to combine some of my lyrics into a poetry book. Any thoughts about that?
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I looked at your portfolio to see your work and discovered how much I adore many of the poems/lyrics you have written. You definetly get my vote. I admire and encourage any one to move forward. My honest opinion, you asked for it, is yes I do think you have a gift and a talent. It is a hard business, ask yourself if you have the desire and enery. GOOD LUCK AND GOD BLESS whatever your decisions!!!
Comment from alf collier
Hi unknown author. Loved your poem!!! Have one question, to appease my enquiring mind, what do the seven letters represent??? No More, which I first thought, gives only six letters!!! alf
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Hi unknown author. Loved your poem!!! Have one question, to appease my enquiring mind, what do the seven letters represent??? No More, which I first thought, gives only six letters!!! alf
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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g-o-o-d-b-y-e. Thanks for your comments and support.
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AAAHHH!!! Thank you!!!
Comment from RYME4U
Well done! The seven letters of the word "Goodbye" brought this speaker to his senses too late. The pathos and heartbreak show through very well and your well chosen words
are very descriptive, Excellent job
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Well done! The seven letters of the word "Goodbye" brought this speaker to his senses too late. The pathos and heartbreak show through very well and your well chosen words
are very descriptive, Excellent job
Comment Written 30-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from courtneysthoughts
This is a wonderfully written poem from a very interesting point of view. Loneliness is a very sad thing and can make fools of men and women alike. I think you expressed well how those that make a mistake feel throughout the process. Well done on the prompt and I wish you luck.
Courtney
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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This is a wonderfully written poem from a very interesting point of view. Loneliness is a very sad thing and can make fools of men and women alike. I think you expressed well how those that make a mistake feel throughout the process. Well done on the prompt and I wish you luck.
Courtney
Comment Written 30-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend. What a passionate poem and a wonderful entry in the contest, my best to you.
Thanks for using my artwork, I am honored. LOyd
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Hello poet friend. What a passionate poem and a wonderful entry in the contest, my best to you.
Thanks for using my artwork, I am honored. LOyd
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments, support, and another fantastic picture. When I need one maybe I should just contact you first and see what you have available. Works for me.
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You aver kind and welcome, Loyd
Comment from BlueMarble
Wonderfully catchy verses that capture your story so well. Well written and follows a good rhythm. Best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Wonderfully catchy verses that capture your story so well. Well written and follows a good rhythm. Best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Bill Schott
Well this guy is the big loser all around I guess. He loses what he has and loses what he wants. That would make him a loser I guess.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Well this guy is the big loser all around I guess. He loses what he has and loses what he wants. That would make him a loser I guess.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and syupport. Appreciate them very much.
