Lupo Dexus (Duelists Book 1)
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Knight part 2"a disparate group of exiles is drawn together
3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I must of missed your previous post. I followed until the last scene. I am not sure who's POV you're in. I caught 'he'. I am sure I am missing something. Please help. Other wise this is well written.
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I must of missed your previous post. I followed until the last scene. I am not sure who's POV you're in. I caught 'he'. I am sure I am missing something. Please help. Other wise this is well written.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
Comment from Edward J
I thought this was well written. You have a cast of interesting characters. I like the little details that you put in the story (such as the selection of arrows or the sound of her laugh like a kitten). This is easy to read and enjoyable. Great job.
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I thought this was well written. You have a cast of interesting characters. I like the little details that you put in the story (such as the selection of arrows or the sound of her laugh like a kitten). This is easy to read and enjoyable. Great job.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
Comment from Sasha
Wow! I am not sure what more to say...you continue to impress me with your wild imagination and ability to convey the most gruesome imagery conceivable...but with great style. The characters are building nicely and I am anxious to know what is going to happen next. Great work with this one, I enjoyed it very much.
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Wow! I am not sure what more to say...you continue to impress me with your wild imagination and ability to convey the most gruesome imagery conceivable...but with great style. The characters are building nicely and I am anxious to know what is going to happen next. Great work with this one, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
