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Comment from dmt1967
Evil is everywhere my friend. I enjoyed reading this and liked your take on the long unanswered question. Are we born evil? Or do our circumstances change us? Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Evil is everywhere my friend. I enjoyed reading this and liked your take on the long unanswered question. Are we born evil? Or do our circumstances change us? Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Circumstance certainly change us.......but core of who you are.....come down to only two....love or hate life or death....-wink- love Bug-
Comment from fimarie78
This is a very interesting poem, which can be interpreted differently be each reader.
Cancerous is a perfect descriptor in the opening.
'orchards of ruin'. This could reference the apple which Eve took and also the problem of alcoholism.
I like the 4th stanza. very well chosen vocabulary.
'death practioner' was also a well chosen phrase.
thanjs for sharing. Fiona
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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This is a very interesting poem, which can be interpreted differently be each reader.
Cancerous is a perfect descriptor in the opening.
'orchards of ruin'. This could reference the apple which Eve took and also the problem of alcoholism.
I like the 4th stanza. very well chosen vocabulary.
'death practioner' was also a well chosen phrase.
thanjs for sharing. Fiona
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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This comes from observing...hmm no....surviving and overcoming life tsunami by understanding what "they" trade with their sins. Thank you sweet Lady....love-
Comment from Megalips
Reconciled...You clearly have a great deal of symbolism here, some of which admittedly elude me. Your first line 'evil seeds itself' is very effective and valid in the way evil and sin begins for all of us, as something small that grows slowly and unrecognized until it is too large to manage. There are several references to evil's impact on 'producing fruit', Christ's mainstay metaphor for evangelistic productivity...'orchards of ruins' and 'fruit putrefied'.
"Weeds have no ability to flower...beautiful"
I am reminded how inclined we are as humans to be drawn to physical beauty and neglect inner beauty...the one often disguised as the other.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Reconciled...You clearly have a great deal of symbolism here, some of which admittedly elude me. Your first line 'evil seeds itself' is very effective and valid in the way evil and sin begins for all of us, as something small that grows slowly and unrecognized until it is too large to manage. There are several references to evil's impact on 'producing fruit', Christ's mainstay metaphor for evangelistic productivity...'orchards of ruins' and 'fruit putrefied'.
"Weeds have no ability to flower...beautiful"
I am reminded how inclined we are as humans to be drawn to physical beauty and neglect inner beauty...the one often disguised as the other.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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-smile- ....so what's your point hotlips...? mine is my name...-wink-...hows that for metaphor...-smile- even unplanned has one honey...trust me on this...see ya around.....love bug-
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
evil seeds itself...
cancerous
How very true. Evil is proliferating at a rapid rate.
smothering innocents realm (innocent's)
death practitioner's only wear authors sign..(author's)
A thought-provoking poen. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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evil seeds itself...
cancerous
How very true. Evil is proliferating at a rapid rate.
smothering innocents realm (innocent's)
death practitioner's only wear authors sign..(author's)
A thought-provoking poen. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Hi Debbie...-smile- ...thank you Sweet Lady.....I hope your okay,....I know people are worried. love michael
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
This poem is a true sermon as stanch & ready & vibrant as any prayer ever written. The repetition of this daily, as was to do in/with yourself consciously, unconsciously, or subconsciously, to get to this gel of a gem point is a true act of faith.
Great going! Subtle no real aggressive malicious attack on these so-called alluded to hypocrites &/or bigots, & yet the substance of the work of art penetrates deeply into one's mind & soul.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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This poem is a true sermon as stanch & ready & vibrant as any prayer ever written. The repetition of this daily, as was to do in/with yourself consciously, unconsciously, or subconsciously, to get to this gel of a gem point is a true act of faith.
Great going! Subtle no real aggressive malicious attack on these so-called alluded to hypocrites &/or bigots, & yet the substance of the work of art penetrates deeply into one's mind & soul.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for that ....smile Have great night Love bug
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Comment from royowen
I think I can work this one out, with some recognisable adjectives and some well chosen adverbs! Beware the wolf who comes to you in sheep's clothing, that murder children, who live by stealth, not openly but in malevolent hiding, well done, Michael, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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I think I can work this one out, with some recognisable adjectives and some well chosen adverbs! Beware the wolf who comes to you in sheep's clothing, that murder children, who live by stealth, not openly but in malevolent hiding, well done, Michael, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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I had been celibate for ten years before I ....thought I listened to God......-smile-...I did, I know....we......jack shit up Roy...its us.....and some are naturally inclined they get off on it...the misery of others. These will and do prove themselves repeteadly reprebate....by choice...emmm-headtilt-...perhaps at one time....but it becomes "normal" to them.....i've seen it....and scared me, because it was me at times.....but some are uncapable of recognizing this....therefor having some semblence of control. Some people are just evil Bro....-smile-....love bug-
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I was the same bro. God caused mr to stop, well done. Michael
Comment from jlsavell
evil comes in many forms
many tongues,
wagging, wagging
to seduce and to destroy
it turns special into a poisoned chalice
dressed in white robes
or charisma's smile
all the same, all the same
just as weeds choke
smothering life from what could have been
lies and deceit are like
worms eating their way into
the heart of flesh
orchards of promise wilt
wither into the decay of earth
destruction looms
over a promised land
where once, love could have flourished
fulfillment murdered
through three- way wars
of harlot's queen
whom sits pristine
in a castle she claims
and the king declares
it's all for good
but the passion of real
was just a dream crushed
for the beast that prevails
devoured the realm of true love
so let the preachers preach
and the followers reach for
the vile of their worth
while the reaper sits
high on her perch
and blood spills from the heart
of fortune's good treasures
for the mark of all beasts
is a Judas Kiss
..... in full measure
And nothing blooms beautiful
You are right
For cancer is coy
Crawling through the veins
of true life
and 666 crosses the moors
of a bountiful kingdom's store
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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evil comes in many forms
many tongues,
wagging, wagging
to seduce and to destroy
it turns special into a poisoned chalice
dressed in white robes
or charisma's smile
all the same, all the same
just as weeds choke
smothering life from what could have been
lies and deceit are like
worms eating their way into
the heart of flesh
orchards of promise wilt
wither into the decay of earth
destruction looms
over a promised land
where once, love could have flourished
fulfillment murdered
through three- way wars
of harlot's queen
whom sits pristine
in a castle she claims
and the king declares
it's all for good
but the passion of real
was just a dream crushed
for the beast that prevails
devoured the realm of true love
so let the preachers preach
and the followers reach for
the vile of their worth
while the reaper sits
high on her perch
and blood spills from the heart
of fortune's good treasures
for the mark of all beasts
is a Judas Kiss
..... in full measure
And nothing blooms beautiful
You are right
For cancer is coy
Crawling through the veins
of true life
and 666 crosses the moors
of a bountiful kingdom's store
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Sweetheart...I told you not to order that last margarita. -headtilt-....what...? have you ever heard of big love....? well he's me....-smile-....and I love you too. michael
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My faculties are operating at full tilt. So what's wrong with my review. It's as biblical as it gets. Are not you familiar with the great harlot I of Babylon and 666? She declares she sits as a queen.
Geniuses like their margaritas
No need to be fecicious nor sarcastic.
Just say what you mean not "I love you too." No need for lies.
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Smile....jimi....you be nice now ....you hear
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and you really know what my review was about right.. think about it
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: the symbolism of the numbers 6__, scare the hell out of me. I have this feeling that any exposure to these numbers somehow are a link to the worst evil imaginable and that I must not read them, see them, write them and avoid them totally.
As usual, this poem captivates me yet bewilders me all at the same time. And the music . . . slow and uncertain, but beautiful . . . much like yourself I'm thinking . . . Thunder
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Michael: the symbolism of the numbers 6__, scare the hell out of me. I have this feeling that any exposure to these numbers somehow are a link to the worst evil imaginable and that I must not read them, see them, write them and avoid them totally.
As usual, this poem captivates me yet bewilders me all at the same time. And the music . . . slow and uncertain, but beautiful . . . much like yourself I'm thinking . . . Thunder
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Hey thunder smile.....I hope your okay.....you can always come stay here if your not smile I mean it.....love you lady michael
Comment from danpald
Black the poem that touches here
Seeing only the devil's schemes
The way to turn the world from truth
To the devouring lure of the unpure
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Black the poem that touches here
Seeing only the devil's schemes
The way to turn the world from truth
To the devouring lure of the unpure
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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since day one of sunshine felt on our faces....we've been lied to and decieved...we learn to be ...what is natural and un....preyed upon by "them' who can never know...not even an instance moment what beautiful created can be....and so "they" hate it and aim to kill it. thanks for reading.....love Bug-
Comment from l.raven
Michael, your last line says it all...weeds have no ability to flower beautiful...bad people are only good to themselves...and in time...they don't even like their selves...old age will leave them lonely...your poems baby are unique...everyone has a style of their own...yours is through your music...and your writing...and when listened to and read...can truly be understood...I love your poem...and I love the video....and I love you....Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Michael, your last line says it all...weeds have no ability to flower beautiful...bad people are only good to themselves...and in time...they don't even like their selves...old age will leave them lonely...your poems baby are unique...everyone has a style of their own...yours is through your music...and your writing...and when listened to and read...can truly be understood...I love your poem...and I love the video....and I love you....Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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that sow of satan who began the breathing of life into the destruction of sacred ordained death unto do part. the same I felt for um pitied really, when so miserable when her husband died, the same I saved, prayed for in hospital chapel to spare her life so she could murder mine. the same who ah seduced when I was vulnerable and afraid to refuse....who lied....told all....ruined twenty some years of many lives for "attention' ....I forgave....called her mother even....yes she is alone now....even surrounded by her offspring of corruption. Good for her....my mercy for this one has long left the station...forgive me....love you Michael
