Spring's on stage
Almost ready to perform. Raise the curtain.3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice prompt!
Good job on getting the reader wanting more.
I love the art work.
An excellent idea
Well thought out
Easy to understand
Write on!
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Nice prompt!
Good job on getting the reader wanting more.
I love the art work.
An excellent idea
Well thought out
Easy to understand
Write on!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Debbie Noland
I love this metaphor of spring as an actor/actress waiting to come onstage. "Rehearsing" is a perfect way to suggest this time of year when we have springlike weather intermittently with regular relapses to blustery cold. That is a lot of meaning for a mere seven words to carry.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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I love this metaphor of spring as an actor/actress waiting to come onstage. "Rehearsing" is a perfect way to suggest this time of year when we have springlike weather intermittently with regular relapses to blustery cold. That is a lot of meaning for a mere seven words to carry.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bizzygirl
The 3-5-3 is met, the sartori line is 'rehearsing' which is observation of stage/curtain. The photo although not necessary adds to visual understanding. The poem does stand alone. Well done
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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The 3-5-3 is met, the sartori line is 'rehearsing' which is observation of stage/curtain. The photo although not necessary adds to visual understanding. The poem does stand alone. Well done
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you for reviewing.
