Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

I like the way your story is progressing Rhonda. Can dace and her students finally get to talk to Charles and find out more about why Nick wants their help. 8-)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015

Thank you for keeping up and for taking the time to read and review. The action part of the story is about to pick up and take off, and you will learn more about both men later. Thanks again,
Rhonda

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Rhonda, exciting stuff mate. This is another great chapter, perfectly written without a word out of place that I can spot. You are very good at this writing caper. I will keep an eye out for the next chapter, we are getting closer to solving the mystery and I want to know what's in that darn package LOL. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015

Thanks for the review, Fez, and don't be in too big a hurry to find out what's inside the mystery package. It holds the clue to the whole adventure!
Rhonda

reply by Walu Feral on 26-Apr-2015

Once a feral sets it's sights on something it will never let it out of it's sights LOL

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015

Good for you! And thanks for your support. It means a lot to me.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well they've located Charles, the son of Nick Collins, who now knows about the mysterious C-daddy, "His mugging" and reluctance to receive medical assistance. Nick Collins has apparently gone to the home to check out and see if C-Daddy is ok, Charles tells her to go see Nick Collins there, so Cadence will go alone, without the kids! Well done, Rhonda, good scribing, blessings, Roy.
Spag: looked at both figures ( conspiritively ) = conspiratorially.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015

Thanks so much for the great and helpful review! I knew that word just didn't sound right, but I couldn't quite figure out what was wrong. I shall fix it at once. Blessing to you as well, Roy,

Rhonda

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Another intriguing chapter. She has decided to bite and take the challenge of finding the homeless man. My gut feeling is these men are up to no good, but will see if I am correct. I can't imagine what is in that package that is so important, money? drugs? So many things it could be.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015

Thank you so much for the review and for continuing to read my book. Yes, these men are up to something and only time will tell what that it. Thanks again,
Rhonda

reply by MelB on 26-Apr-2015

You're welcome Rhonda.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Action flows smoothly. Easy to follow story line. Descriptive language held reader's interest throughout. Well written. Write on.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015

Thank you, again, Brett. You are awesome!
Rhonda