Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

This was a harrowing ride and I know it's just the beginning. I was laughing as I read this realizing how drawn in I am to this story. This all seems real to me. What great characters, they all seem so genuine. I'm imagining someone speculating, "How do you get to hell?", DUH! The Hellevator. Ha! mikey

 Comment Written 02-May-2015

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reply by the author on 02-May-2015

Thanks a bunch, Mikey. :)

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Tara thinks she can help Blaze by going to Hell after her. Theo and Gary are determined to make the trip also. Not like going to the Vatican. This will be quite an experience for Father Murphy. He'll have a first-hand experience of what Hell is like. Theo seems especially bothered by the thought of going down below. Tara gives them an idea of what to expect and takes the lead. This is quite an adventure, and well described. judi

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks a bunch, Judi. :)

reply by judiverse on 01-May-2015

You're welcome. I really enjoyed the idea of them all trouping down to Hell. Father Murphy will have quite a story to tell. judi

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

I'm surprised it isn't dangerous for the others to visit Hell. Especially the priest. I'm sure Luke would love to have these lovely people in his clutches. I'm sure this is going to get really interesting really soon. Did I mention I was in the mood for another Luke scene? Ha ha ha ha ha ha.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015

Thanks again. I just added the next chapter, so you can get your Luke fix now. :)

Comment from boxergirl

Exceptional

Wow. If that ride didn't give Theo a new perspective on the siuation, nothing will. Can't wait to see where this is going.
I thought God was blocking their progress in catching up with Blaze by stalling the truck, etc. 8-)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015

Thanks a million for the six stars. Much appreciated, and glad you enjoyed the ride. :)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hey, Phyllis, I think this is the first time you went into detail about the hellevator - cool. Great description about the affects of the ride down. Also, I love the image! Does Father Murphy want to confront Luke in person? Why would he go there? Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015

Thank you so much, Lou. Yes, this is the first time a Hellevator trip is described... that was fun to do. As for the priest, he talks about Hell all the time, so he's ultra-curious. Now he can say he KNOWS what Hell is like. And he can describe the condemned souls screaming in the fire pits to a terrified congregation. LOL!

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Marvelous invention that Hellavator. Better to just cast them down and watch them go. Action flows smoothly. Story line easy to follow. Write on.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015

Thanks again, Brett. Nice to meet you, and I'm glad you enjoyed this bit of the story today. :)

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Talk about a bunch of party crashers. I don't think I'd volunteer for that trip. It will be interesting what happens when they meet Luke.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Carolyn. :)

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Oh boy! Can't imagine anyone wanting to visit Hell. Well, maybe the priest for curiosity's sake. Nice touch with the oil tanker preventing them from reaching Blaze in time. The meeting with Luke should be interesting.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015

Thank you so much, Shari. :)

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I love the pix. I haven't received many notices of new writing today. Have you? Seems awfully quite here today. I might end caught up which never happens on a Sunday. Take care, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015

Thanks again, Debbie. :)

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Call me a coward, I wouldn't go there. Never! Not of my own will for sure! My luck the Hellevator would break down and never run again.LOL Great story Phyllis. Another cliff hanger. Will they get her out of there before Luke finds out they are there? To be continued. xsx Nancy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015

I don't blame you. I would stay and wait to hear all about it from the others. Thanks a bunch, Nancy. :)