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Artist At Work

a colorful poem about Mother Nature

18 total reviews 
Comment from benoenose
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Exceptionally beautiful write up that has captured the mind set of those love nature lovers. With beauty to the senses the poem reflects the wholeness of nature. Mostly suggested for nature lovers and those prefer ecological reading.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much for sharing my poem and your very kind praise. Rod
Comment from w.j.debi
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You paint a vivid picture with your words. What a colorful palette Mother Nature uses. Great use of personification to make her seems like a living artist. Comparing her to Monet and Van Gough just adds to the illusion. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
    I am delighted you enjoyed my poem and my use of personification. Thank you so much for your kind praise and encouragement. Rod
Comment from rspoet
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You have painted a beautiful poem with a palette of wonderful words.
Nicely rhymed with subtle alliteration that enhances the effect
Short, colorful and beautiful would have been a better prompt for this poem.
Gorgeous presentation with excellent art work to poem match, perfect light yellow background and leaf green font.
I've read all of the entries, many are very good, this is one is superb.
I give very few six star ratings, but this poem exceptional.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
    Wow! I am flattered and thrilled by your effusive praise of "Artist at Work." I especially appreciate your explicit commentary and the six-star rating. Thank you so much! Rod
Comment from Judy Couch
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This rhymes well and follows the prompt. I can imagine the colors of the trees in autumn. Each season has something special about it.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    Thank you for sharing my poem, Judy. I am delighted you enjoyed the rhymes.
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha from Hawaii,
I love your poem about natures artist colors, so inspirational. Beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    So pleased to hear from you and share my poem. Aloha and thank you!
Comment from mommerry
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The perfect rhyming caught my ear, the artist's pallet caught my eye. We appreciate an artist's attempt to recreate nature but above all, we appreciate the way the Lord covers our world with the colors of autumn. Great job.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    I am delighted you enjoyed the rhymes of this poem. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Your poem is descriptively lovely, clearly written, and interesting. Combined with gorgeous painting--a fantastic duo. I cannot specify a "best" line because they are all best. Marilyn/BeasPeas

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much for sharing my poem, Marilyn. I am delighted you enjoyed it.
Comment from Charlene0513
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You paint a lovely portrait of what hues are so poignant as the year folds itself into the autumn season.
Good description; nice flow/enjambments
Charlene0513

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    I am so pleased you enjoyed the portrait. Thanks for sharing!
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Excellent poetry, Anonymous Poet. It's very well composed, in wonderfully rhymed couplets, and the artwork you've chose as an accompaniment to your carefully chosen words was the perfect choice to compliment your piece. Besides...I happen to be partial to fall.

Well done, and good luck...~DK

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    Thanks so much for sharing this one, Dean. I am delighted your enjoyed the pairing of poem & artwork.
reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Apr-2015
    My pleasure...:)
Comment from RYME4U
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I really enjoyed these delightful rhyming couplets. Such a lovely comparison to a human artist. I love that you used art terminolgy and artist's names. Excellent job!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    I am delighted you enjoyed the visit to Nature's art gallery. Thanks for sharing!