Reviews from

White Picket Fence

short poem

5 total reviews 
Comment from emkoutny
Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Nice color imagery in this poem. I loved the picture also. It reminded me of my mother's garden as she has a white picket fence and tons of birds. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
    Thank you
Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

As a gardener, I like your well-described garden. Your poem is a little glimpse of color (well done for the contest) with good presentation to accompany it.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    Thank you
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very descriptive and well written. I like the picture your words present and also the picture you included with your poem. Very well done!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
    Thank you
Comment from Delahay
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This paints such a vivid picture of a summer garden in full bloom growing in someone's yard next to a white picket fence. A lovely thought.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
    Thank you for your review
Comment from tfawcus
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Short and colourful indeed! What a striking image of a cottage garden you provide with your picture and develop in your poem. Nice contrasts in both and some judicious use of alliteration in your lines.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
    Thank you for your review