BLAZE: Angel from Hell
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "Blaze Shocks Everyone"Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.
31 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
Great build-up and transition. Somewhat a blessing that Theo is thrust into some crazy action now instead of dwelling too much on what he has just learned. It puts it on the back burner and focusing on the current dilemma. It should reinforce his feelings for her thinking she may be in danger. Somehow got behind again. On my way. Good stuff here. mikey
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Great build-up and transition. Somewhat a blessing that Theo is thrust into some crazy action now instead of dwelling too much on what he has just learned. It puts it on the back burner and focusing on the current dilemma. It should reinforce his feelings for her thinking she may be in danger. Somehow got behind again. On my way. Good stuff here. mikey
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thanks a bunch, Mikey. They're all on their way to Hell... won't you come along? :)
Comment from Muffins
Just when I thought everything was settled, Blaze takes off. In her fragile state, she can't see that Theo needs time to digest this extraordinary news.
The dialogue is riddled with tension & action creating an edge of the seat reaction. Fantastic, well deserved chapter.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Just when I thought everything was settled, Blaze takes off. In her fragile state, she can't see that Theo needs time to digest this extraordinary news.
The dialogue is riddled with tension & action creating an edge of the seat reaction. Fantastic, well deserved chapter.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for reading, Muffins. She's determined to tell Luke she's quitting. But she feels safe after God told her Luke no longer has any power over her.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
A little hitch in the plan. I can't imagine what Luke would have to say to Blaze. But I'm sure we'll find out. (At least I hope so, since I'm in need of another one of your Luke scenes!) You are so skilled at writing about the devil. LOL Nice job, Phyllis.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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A little hitch in the plan. I can't imagine what Luke would have to say to Blaze. But I'm sure we'll find out. (At least I hope so, since I'm in need of another one of your Luke scenes!) You are so skilled at writing about the devil. LOL Nice job, Phyllis.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, Marietta. :)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Easy to see why this is an All-Time Best. Action flows smoothly. Descriptive language draws reader into scene and holds interest. Write on.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Easy to see why this is an All-Time Best. Action flows smoothly. Descriptive language draws reader into scene and holds interest. Write on.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for taking a look at the book, Brett. :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Fell into hell. Sounds like my luck! Great chapter. Aren't you amazed what that 4 part story has developed into. It just grows and grows. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Fell into hell. Sounds like my luck! Great chapter. Aren't you amazed what that 4 part story has developed into. It just grows and grows. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much, Debbie. :)
Comment from judiverse
This is definitely worth a 6'er. That's a bold move on Blaze's part to go back to hell and tell Lucifer she's quitting and probably a few other choice things too. It's a big risk, and Tara wants to stop her. Whatever happens, it's clear the Theo still loves Blaze. Great reaction on Theo's part to the concept of a Hellevator. This section really speeds right along, and it's quite a build-up to Blaze's meeting with Luke. She feels that God will protect her, even in hell. judi
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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This is definitely worth a 6'er. That's a bold move on Blaze's part to go back to hell and tell Lucifer she's quitting and probably a few other choice things too. It's a big risk, and Tara wants to stop her. Whatever happens, it's clear the Theo still loves Blaze. Great reaction on Theo's part to the concept of a Hellevator. This section really speeds right along, and it's quite a build-up to Blaze's meeting with Luke. She feels that God will protect her, even in hell. judi
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you so verrry much for the sixer, Judi. In the next chapter, they all go down to Hell, and then... I have to write what will happen there. Look forward to seeing Luke again. I've missed the old dumbie. :)
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You're very welcome. I'm sue Luke would be glad to hear he's been missed. judi
Comment from Ric Myworld
Another fine chapter that leaves us in hopes of Blaze being caught before she can get to the Hellevator. I'm sure Theo will loosen up a bit when he finally realizes that Blaze will be more fun with just a little demon in her. HE HE, sorry, sometimes I just can't control that little demon in me. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Another fine chapter that leaves us in hopes of Blaze being caught before she can get to the Hellevator. I'm sure Theo will loosen up a bit when he finally realizes that Blaze will be more fun with just a little demon in her. HE HE, sorry, sometimes I just can't control that little demon in me. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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LOL! Ric, you're incorrigible, but I love you anyway. Thanks a bunch for a fun review. :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Ah, ha! I knew it. Blaze is one of the original Hell's Angels.
And Luke is just a bumbling idiot. Figures.
Oh good for Theo, he's human after all. I'm not sure marrying a demon would be my cup of tea.
Your story is picking up some new momentum, that might put us in an even hotter seat.
Super job, wonderful you.
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Ah, ha! I knew it. Blaze is one of the original Hell's Angels.
And Luke is just a bumbling idiot. Figures.
Oh good for Theo, he's human after all. I'm not sure marrying a demon would be my cup of tea.
Your story is picking up some new momentum, that might put us in an even hotter seat.
Super job, wonderful you.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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First, thank you for reading.
Second, how did you change your name? I looked for that and couldn't find it.
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Just go into edit profile and type in a new nic where your old nic is. It's simpler than it used to be. :)
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Thanks! :)
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I tried "edit profile" on both versions and found no field for nickname. I see a field 1 and 2 at the top that are filled in with premier writer and premier reader, but no place for a new name. Can you direct me to it?
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For me, my nickname is just right above premier author, premier reader. Then you just click on it.
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I don't have that line on either version. What browser do you use?
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IE
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So where does your nic show up in your profile?
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Nic is right above fanstory url, but it does NOT show up in EDIT PROFILE, not on IE or any of my browsers. I think it must be because my computer is a Mac. I can run Windows on it, but I'll have to load IE on the Windows part if I want to change my nic. Just want it for Penguin poems. Thanks. :)
Comment from rmj09
The focus stopping Blaze from going to hell. The storyline development when Theo discovers Blaze was a demon in hell Father Murphy tells him not to judge her as he doesn't know the whole story. Tara and Blaze try to tell him what occurred. Blaze is anger with Gary and says she'll go to hell and tell Lucifer off. Everyone tries to stop her. Theo tells her it will take time and she tells him to get an annulment has it is cheaper then a divorce. That she could tell by what he said to Gary how he really felt. She takes off for her old apartment and the hellavator. Gary takes a short cut to arrive before her.
The dialog is clear and the mental picture developed is fear for Blaze who is going to tell Lucifer off. The narration shows the action everyone chasing after Blaze.
The hook will Theo believe Tara and Gary know what they are doing?
Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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The focus stopping Blaze from going to hell. The storyline development when Theo discovers Blaze was a demon in hell Father Murphy tells him not to judge her as he doesn't know the whole story. Tara and Blaze try to tell him what occurred. Blaze is anger with Gary and says she'll go to hell and tell Lucifer off. Everyone tries to stop her. Theo tells her it will take time and she tells him to get an annulment has it is cheaper then a divorce. That she could tell by what he said to Gary how he really felt. She takes off for her old apartment and the hellavator. Gary takes a short cut to arrive before her.
The dialog is clear and the mental picture developed is fear for Blaze who is going to tell Lucifer off. The narration shows the action everyone chasing after Blaze.
The hook will Theo believe Tara and Gary know what they are doing?
Keep on writing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Wow! Another six! I could hug you, Rita. I'm thrilled that you like this part so much. :)
Comment from Misrael
This was a sobering and yet also an exciting read. I can hardly wait to read more and find out what happens to Blaze. I enjoyed the read very much. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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This was a sobering and yet also an exciting read. I can hardly wait to read more and find out what happens to Blaze. I enjoyed the read very much. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much. :)
