Littoral
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Venetian Blind"Poems about the coastline
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Comment from benoenose
Natural catastrophe occurs in various parts of the earth, especially when that occurs in Venice a great part of disaster is in account. Completely destroying the architectural beauty that Venice had. But the poet also looks to the other corner of beauty of architecture preserved in Birmingham.
Oceanic destruction of architecture is mentioned by the Poet as the great tragic event of architecture. Therefore, the beach never understands what humans try to emulate.
However the poet is concerned about the architectural beauty destroyed by natural calamities especially by the Ocean. Could this poem widely read by architectural lovers.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Natural catastrophe occurs in various parts of the earth, especially when that occurs in Venice a great part of disaster is in account. Completely destroying the architectural beauty that Venice had. But the poet also looks to the other corner of beauty of architecture preserved in Birmingham.
Oceanic destruction of architecture is mentioned by the Poet as the great tragic event of architecture. Therefore, the beach never understands what humans try to emulate.
However the poet is concerned about the architectural beauty destroyed by natural calamities especially by the Ocean. Could this poem widely read by architectural lovers.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks for a searching and thorough review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Nice picture that illustrates the poem well. Good accounting of Venice. Action flows well and story line easy to follow. Write on.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Nice picture that illustrates the poem well. Good accounting of Venice. Action flows well and story line easy to follow. Write on.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Many thanks Brett, for reading and reviewing. Glad it didn't give you a hard time!
Comment from mauidux1963
I love this poem.......In all honesty Ive never been a huge fan of poetry that promoted a "cause".....not because I found the "cause" unworthy....I just felt that in the attempt to promote the cause the poet often lost the lyrical beauty of the piece and it ended up reading ( at least for me ) more like a magazine article than a poem. I did not sense that with your poem....it was beautifuly written also it felt more like you were just stating a fact ( about the peril that Venice faces ) more than rallying a cry to save it. Nice job!
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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I love this poem.......In all honesty Ive never been a huge fan of poetry that promoted a "cause".....not because I found the "cause" unworthy....I just felt that in the attempt to promote the cause the poet often lost the lyrical beauty of the piece and it ended up reading ( at least for me ) more like a magazine article than a poem. I did not sense that with your poem....it was beautifuly written also it felt more like you were just stating a fact ( about the peril that Venice faces ) more than rallying a cry to save it. Nice job!
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Very many thanks for your detailed and clear-seeing review. You've got my intention in one! I must have done something right - at last!
