sunset clouds
Colorful Clouds24 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
A picture would definitely help illustrate this well written poem. Short, sweet, and directly to the point. Well done. Write on.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
A picture would definitely help illustrate this well written poem. Short, sweet, and directly to the point. Well done. Write on.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your review, rating and very kind comment. / Pharp
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Rather short piece, but beautifully worded. I would have liked more of your descriptive work. Sunsets are very beautiful, especially the ones in winter. You give a good description. Keep writing. Warm regards Dorothy x
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
Rather short piece, but beautifully worded. I would have liked more of your descriptive work. Sunsets are very beautiful, especially the ones in winter. You give a good description. Keep writing. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind comments. / Pharp
Comment from c_lucas
Praise without sincerity is lost on the receiver. The sad part about the colorful sunset clouds is that the reflection is from aerial pollutants. This is well written.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
Praise without sincerity is lost on the receiver. The sad part about the colorful sunset clouds is that the reflection is from aerial pollutants. This is well written.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and kind remarks. / Pharp
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You're welcome, Pharp. Charlie
Comment from bizzygirl
Perfect description of God's sunsets, as only He can paint them WELL DONE. Imagary does not have to be long to be beautiful
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
Perfect description of God's sunsets, as only He can paint them WELL DONE. Imagary does not have to be long to be beautiful
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review, and very kind comments/ Pharp
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem, although I would use a bigger font as it is hard to read the small writing. Also I would make the background color blue like heaven or gold like the sunset, if I were you. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
This is a good poem, although I would use a bigger font as it is hard to read the small writing. Also I would make the background color blue like heaven or gold like the sunset, if I were you. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and suggestions. Greatly appreciated/ Pharp
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good title and used effectively in the first line of the poem.
-It is also very good imagery; the reader can picture the setting sun and clouds.
-The second line is also very good imagery and shows the colors without telling about them.
-Good conclusion.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
-Good title and used effectively in the first line of the poem.
-It is also very good imagery; the reader can picture the setting sun and clouds.
-The second line is also very good imagery and shows the colors without telling about them.
-Good conclusion.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and kind comments. / Pharp
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You are welcome for the review.
Comment from petalangela
There is no finer beauty than a sunset or a sunrise your words are lovely and indeed feel so true I had never looked at it that way before you're so right. It is a a well written descriptive poem
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
There is no finer beauty than a sunset or a sunrise your words are lovely and indeed feel so true I had never looked at it that way before you're so right. It is a a well written descriptive poem
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind remarks. / Pharp
Comment from Rubylou
Beautiful haiku.
It gives forth a sense of 'all's well' at the end of a long day.
It brings peace to the soul as "Heaven gives praise."
I can see the warm glow of the sun setting bathing all in glory.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
Beautiful haiku.
It gives forth a sense of 'all's well' at the end of a long day.
It brings peace to the soul as "Heaven gives praise."
I can see the warm glow of the sun setting bathing all in glory.
Rubylou
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your rating and review. Greatly appreciated. Pharp
Comment from Glasstruth
Very serene and calming. Definitely creates a picture in mind. The last line is a great closer, but wish this could've been longer. Like the title, that also adds to the poem. Well done. Les
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
Very serene and calming. Definitely creates a picture in mind. The last line is a great closer, but wish this could've been longer. Like the title, that also adds to the poem. Well done. Les
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and kind comments. /Pharp
Comment from scd41
Sunset clouds have beauty of their own. You have packed the short poem with words where it is effortless to visualize them like 'reflective colours'. The best is ' Heaven gives praise. Though the poem stands on its own, you could have made it more beautiful with a matching picture.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
Sunset clouds have beauty of their own. You have packed the short poem with words where it is effortless to visualize them like 'reflective colours'. The best is ' Heaven gives praise. Though the poem stands on its own, you could have made it more beautiful with a matching picture.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend/ Pharp