Dance therapy
a word acrostic contest20 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Mary,
first let me say... such a wonderful visual...glad to see there could be hope for me after all... smile))))))))))))))... and secondly the I found the highlighted acrostic words very effective.
Love the lady on the far right...she's got the knee action happening and her groove on... would have loved to have seen the seniors strutting their stuff in its entirety... let us all hope we can achieve this therapy... bodies willing!
delightful subject matter and a rhythmic flowing entry into this newly formed contest... all the very best dear friend.
With our thoughts we create,
nourishment for the physical soul,
James vx's
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Hi Mary,
first let me say... such a wonderful visual...glad to see there could be hope for me after all... smile))))))))))))))... and secondly the I found the highlighted acrostic words very effective.
Love the lady on the far right...she's got the knee action happening and her groove on... would have loved to have seen the seniors strutting their stuff in its entirety... let us all hope we can achieve this therapy... bodies willing!
delightful subject matter and a rhythmic flowing entry into this newly formed contest... all the very best dear friend.
With our thoughts we create,
nourishment for the physical soul,
James vx's
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks James for your excellent review. I am please you enjoyed it. Mary
Comment from Judy Couch
They were probably completely absorbed in the music and what it meant to them. I'm sure they each had their own memories of the 60s music. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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They were probably completely absorbed in the music and what it meant to them. I'm sure they each had their own memories of the 60s music. Great job.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks Judy.
Comment from Pantygynt
A very clever word acrostic, the second I have reviewed today and only the second I have ever seen, since I am more familiar with the usual initial letter acrostic. These seems to be great fun. I must try one some time. I like your observations on this therap session. I hope it worked for them. I certainly gave you something to write about.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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A very clever word acrostic, the second I have reviewed today and only the second I have ever seen, since I am more familiar with the usual initial letter acrostic. These seems to be great fun. I must try one some time. I like your observations on this therap session. I hope it worked for them. I certainly gave you something to write about.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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thank you for a lovely review, I do appreciate it. I enjoyed writing it. Mary
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Mary,
This one brought a smile to my face because I tend to make up my own moves when I dance also. I have since the old days when I was a hippie, lol.
Loved the way you wove your message through the first word of each line...made perfect sense.
Best of luck with your entry, my friend, Bill
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Hello Mary,
This one brought a smile to my face because I tend to make up my own moves when I dance also. I have since the old days when I was a hippie, lol.
Loved the way you wove your message through the first word of each line...made perfect sense.
Best of luck with your entry, my friend, Bill
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thank you Bill for your excellent review comments, and best wishes, I appreciate it
Mary
Comment from angelface2
Hi Mary. This is such a cute acrostic and probably true for many seniors. I love to dance, but don't have anyone to dance with anymore. Maybe I should try this type, huh? Good luck in the contest. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Hi Mary. This is such a cute acrostic and probably true for many seniors. I love to dance, but don't have anyone to dance with anymore. Maybe I should try this type, huh? Good luck in the contest. Miss Sally
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks Sally for your wonderful review, I really appreciate it.
Mary
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a good one, and with a good message. Older people should jig about, or do some form of exercise, it is important. I used to go Sequence dancing, it was great. You have done very well with this word acrostic. Good luck in the contest. xsx sandra
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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This is a good one, and with a good message. Older people should jig about, or do some form of exercise, it is important. I used to go Sequence dancing, it was great. You have done very well with this word acrostic. Good luck in the contest. xsx sandra
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thank you Sandra for your well wishes for the contest and your great comments. Mary
Comment from Dean Kuch
Or perhaps just a little of both -- hypnotized and self-absorbed, Jackarrie, heh-heh...
Very funny, and good work. I hope you do well in the contest. :)
~Dean
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Or perhaps just a little of both -- hypnotized and self-absorbed, Jackarrie, heh-heh...
Very funny, and good work. I hope you do well in the contest. :)
~Dean
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks Dean for the well wishes for the contest and your excellent rating. Mary
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You're more than welcome, Mary.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your capitals and color contrast to highlight the acrostic form. I could easily visualize the scene even without the picture and had to laugh knowingly! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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I admired your capitals and color contrast to highlight the acrostic form. I could easily visualize the scene even without the picture and had to laugh knowingly! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thanks Joan, for your great review and comments. Mary
Comment from Jean Lutz
Joyful offering for all that are young at heart! But my oh my, where did we leave our minds. Great to see a post from you and I wish you well with the entry.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Joyful offering for all that are young at heart! But my oh my, where did we leave our minds. Great to see a post from you and I wish you well with the entry.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thanks Jean, I appreciate your review and like your comments too. Mary
Comment from robina1978
Truly excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is a well written word-acrostic, a very new form. These seniors dance on music of the sixties. Some are weird and some seem self-absorbed. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Truly excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is a well written word-acrostic, a very new form. These seniors dance on music of the sixties. Some are weird and some seem self-absorbed. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thanks Robina, the contest is over and I won it, to my surprise. Mary
