Earth greets...
'til twilight claims the day.101 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
Great photo that complements your poem very well, needed your foot note to understand it completely. It is about the upcoming sun and how even foreigners turn to God.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Great photo that complements your poem very well, needed your foot note to understand it completely. It is about the upcoming sun and how even foreigners turn to God.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Another well written and presented rhymed poem.
What a lovely subject-sunrise and sunset capture my imagination as well.
There is magic, power and beauty in these words which describe this time so well
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Another well written and presented rhymed poem.
What a lovely subject-sunrise and sunset capture my imagination as well.
There is magic, power and beauty in these words which describe this time so well
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Shirley, for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
Comment from BLACKDYKE
I love the content of this plus your poetic sun dial.
A lovely rollicking gait has this little joy. It is short
and succinct though it is beautifully satisfying to
read. I ain't got a sixer so you'll have to do with
a fiver+1. Eric
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
I love the content of this plus your poetic sun dial.
A lovely rollicking gait has this little joy. It is short
and succinct though it is beautifully satisfying to
read. I ain't got a sixer so you'll have to do with
a fiver+1. Eric
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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You approval is enough Eric, and Thanks so much for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
Comment from shanat
I liked it but, I'm going to ask you to review my poem. Near Death En-Tranced. I want to know if ours is similar?? I've poured my heart and soul into mine and thought outside the box.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
I liked it but, I'm going to ask you to review my poem. Near Death En-Tranced. I want to know if ours is similar?? I've poured my heart and soul into mine and thought outside the box.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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I will Shanat, did you mean to give me four stars, is there something wrong with It? I'll read you poem, blessings, Roy,
Comment from misscookie
Once again you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words are so divine. I can't get them out of my mind God blessed you with a talent to write, thank you for sharing your gift.
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Once again you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words are so divine. I can't get them out of my mind God blessed you with a talent to write, thank you for sharing your gift.
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Cookie, for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
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Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Aussie
Nicely written without a lot of religion entailed. God is light and we know that he controls all the seasons and if He wished, could turn off the sunrise or sunset and leave us in darkness. We live in darkness now, not from the light and dark of days, sin covers the face of the planet and calls us to pray for help.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Nicely written without a lot of religion entailed. God is light and we know that he controls all the seasons and if He wished, could turn off the sunrise or sunset and leave us in darkness. We live in darkness now, not from the light and dark of days, sin covers the face of the planet and calls us to pray for help.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Kay, for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Roy, such a wonderful feel of faith...you write these with so much beauty...I love your poem...and the picture stunning...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Hi Roy, such a wonderful feel of faith...you write these with so much beauty...I love your poem...and the picture stunning...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Linda, for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
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you are so welcome Roy...and you have a great week...Luff xxoo
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You too Linda
Comment from Donovan
Interesting poem and concept. Your poetry certainly is clear as well as your position. I think this work is not a smooth as some of your others. Seems there are nice words but they do not flow into your ending. Just my thought. As always...well done.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Interesting poem and concept. Your poetry certainly is clear as well as your position. I think this work is not a smooth as some of your others. Seems there are nice words but they do not flow into your ending. Just my thought. As always...well done.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Emotion and feeling are everything.
Wonderfully done in flow and meter.
Rhyme and rhythm are spot on.
YOu make the words flow. Like a sing/song
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Emotion and feeling are everything.
Wonderfully done in flow and meter.
Rhyme and rhythm are spot on.
YOu make the words flow. Like a sing/song
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Barb, for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.
Comment from sunnilicious
Fantastic spiritual poem. It is romantic too. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery created. Good storytelling. Good for motivating others into prayers. Fantastic work.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
Fantastic spiritual poem. It is romantic too. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery created. Good storytelling. Good for motivating others into prayers. Fantastic work.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Alicia, for your affirming words, gracious comments, and great review, blessings Roy.